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You are going on a short training course at a college in Greenmount, Northern Ireland. You need somewhere to live while you are there. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter: explain your situationdescribe the accommodati v.1

You are going on a short training course at a college in Greenmount, Northern Ireland. You need somewhere to live while you are there. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter: explain your situationdescribe the accommodati v. 1
Although, a lot of people believe, moving to an English speaking country is the best way in learning English, but it is not the only way in learning the language. I strongly agree with the statement and in my opinion, however, moving might be helpful, but there are various other ways using which one can master English staying at his home. The key feature in mastering any language is constant practice and learning from his/her own mistakes, thus making studying English in USA or Great Britain an excellent choice. Since, living there allows them to communicate with native English speakers on a regular basis, who speak the language with superlative diction and grammar, which helps them in practicing and correcting themselves. For example, a person living in London has to speak in English whenever he/she is supposed to talk to anyone, which is necessary in learning it. In contrast, a person living in a foreign nation is not exposed to English proper enough regularly which makes it difficult and hard to learn. The advancement in teaching modality in the past few decades has completely changed the means of education and made learning English an easy task for many students throughout the world. Even though, there are some difficulties and limitations, it is still possible to learn English living in any foreign country. There are a lot of schools, colleges and universities teaching English to a lot of students in many parts of the world. Not only the institutes, in the present day there are many softwares available for improving vocabulary, grammar and to even practice with fluent English speakers through video calling, which helps them in improving their language. For example, online English classes available on social platforms like YouTube and other websites are becoming very popular these days and the number of people utilizing these videos is increasing in millions day by day. In conclusion, I personally believe, though, studying English in an English speaking nation can be very useful, but it is not the only viable option. Mastering English living in a foreign nation is not impossible, all it requires is a substantial and meticulous use of the available resources.
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a lot of
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people
believe, moving to an
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English speaking
country is the best way in
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learning
English,
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but
it is not the
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only
way in
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learning
the
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language
. I
strongly
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agree
with the statement and in my opinion,
however
, moving might be helpful,
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but
there are various other ways using which one can master English staying at his home.

The key feature in mastering any
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language
is constant practice and
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learning
from his/her
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own
mistakes,
thus
making studying English
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in USA
or Great Britain an excellent choice. Since,
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living
there
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allows
them to communicate with native English speakers on a regular basis, who speak the
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language
with superlative diction and grammar, which
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helps
them in practicing and correcting themselves.
For example
, a person
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living
in London
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
has to
speak in English whenever he/she
is supposed
to talk to anyone, which is necessary in
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learning
it.
In contrast
, a person
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living
in a foreign nation is not exposed to English proper
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enough
regularly
which
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makes
it difficult and
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hard
to learn.

The advancement in teaching modality in the past few decades has completely
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changed
the means of education and made
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learning
English an easy task for
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many
students throughout the world.
Even though
, there are
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some
difficulties and limitations, it is
still
possible to learn English
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living
in any foreign country. There are
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a lot of
schools, colleges and universities teaching English to
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a lot of
students in
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many
parts of the world. Not
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only
the institutes, in the present day there are
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many
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softwares
available for improving vocabulary, grammar and to even practice with fluent English speakers through video calling, which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
them in improving their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
.
For example
, online English classes available on social platforms like YouTube and other websites are becoming
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
popular these days and the number of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
utilizing these videos is increasing in millions day by day.

In conclusion
, I
personally
believe, though, studying English in an
Did you mean the adjective "English-speaking"?
English speaking
nation can be
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very
useful,
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but
it is not the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
viable option. Mastering English
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
living
in a foreign nation is not impossible, all it requires is a substantial and meticulous
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of the available resources.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay You are going on a short training course at a college in Greenmount, Northern Ireland. You need somewhere to live while you are there. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter: explain your situationdescribe the accommodati v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
362 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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