Today, actors are more popular for their money and glamorous lifestyle than rather than for their contribution to the industry, which can have a detrimental impact on the youth. I my opinion, I completely agree with the aforementioned sentence.
Firstly, typically stars have a big fan following especially major the portion of their following is youth. Followers always try to look, behave and live according to the similar lifestyle as their idol. In the current situation, it can be seen that celebrities are spending a lot of money on exotic cars and on high cost cloths which is very appealing to their fans. Consequently, they try to do the same which might not be feasible to their budget.
Secondly, after gaining the stardium in the industry, they start drinking or smoking in the public places which makes young generation think that it is cool to smoke and drink since their role models are doing it. Furthermore, celebrities are often used for marketing and advertisement purposes for goods that are unhealthy and high in price. Promotion of this product from them manipulates people’s decision and they end up purchasing those expensive goods without thinking.
Finally, life style of celebrity always seems tempting to their fans, and they try to achieve the same thing by any means as a result sometimes they might end up in unethical activity which might land them into jail sometime. People start doing criminal activity in order to gain finance they require for spending money like their favourite actor.
In conclusion, I believe most of the time celebrity’s bad behaviour in public places impacts people in a more negative way than the positive.
Today
, actors are more popular for their money and glamorous lifestyle than
rather
than for their contribution to the industry, which can have a detrimental impact on the youth. I my opinion, I completely
agree
with the aforementioned sentence.
Firstly
,
typically
stars have a
big
fan following
especially
major the portion of their following is youth. Followers always try to look, behave and
live
according to the similar lifestyle as their idol. In the
current
situation, it can be
seen
that
celebrities
are spending
a lot of
money on exotic cars and on high cost cloths which is
very
appealing to their fans.
Consequently
, they try to do the same which might not be feasible to their budget.
Secondly
, after gaining the
stardium
in the industry, they
start
drinking or smoking in the public places which
makes
young generation
think
that it is cool to smoke and drink since their role models are doing it.
Furthermore
,
celebrities
are
often
used
for marketing and advertisement purposes for
goods
that are unhealthy and high in price. Promotion of this product from them manipulates
people
’s
decision and
they
end
up purchasing those expensive
goods
without thinking.
Finally
, life style of
celebrity
always seems tempting to their fans, and they try to achieve the same thing by any means
as a result
sometimes
they might
end
up in unethical activity which might land them into jail sometime.
People
start
doing criminal activity in order to gain finance they require for spending money like their
favourite
actor.
In conclusion
, I believe most of the time
celebrity’s
bad
behaviour
in public places impacts
people
in a more
negative
way than the
positive
.
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