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Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome? v.2

Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome? v. 2
There are many common issues faced by developing nations. Some of them are increasing population, providing education and food for them, environmental damage etc. In this essay we would discuss what would be the most significant problems India would face in the next ten years. We will also discuss on possible solutions for these problems. The foremost problem that has already started showing its faces in some parts of India is the effect of extensive urbanization. The major impact of this is reduced land for agriculture. Eventually, this is creating other associated problems of reduced food production. On one side, the population is continuously on the rise. For instance, the Indian population has increased around 20% in the last 20 years. The ability to feed this population is tremendously reduced when farming lands are given away for real estate. The solution to most of these problems could be imposing hard rules that enforces farming lands used only for agriculture. Recently, in 2017 the first rule on this has already been imposed by the government of India. Further, strengthening of these rules will help. Other possible solutions could be connecting the rivers of the country. This will ensure there are no droughts or floods in different parts of the nation. Excess water in one state could be used for irrigating next states plants. To summarize, being a developing nation these problems are commonly anticipated ones; devising careful plans to control and mitigate these risks would definitely help the nation prosper and develop in a faster pace.
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common issues faced by developing
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of them are increasing
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population
, providing education and food for them, environmental damage etc. In this essay we would discuss what would be the most significant
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problems
India would face in the
next
ten years. We will
also
discuss on possible solutions for these problems.

The foremost
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problem
that has already
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started
showing its faces in
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some
parts of India is the effect of extensive urbanization. The major impact of this is
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reduced
land for agriculture.
Eventually
, this is creating other associated
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problems
of
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reduced
food production. On one side, the
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population
is
continuously
on the rise.
For instance
, the Indian
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population
has increased around 20% in the last 20 years. The ability to feed this
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population
is
tremendously
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reduced
when farming lands are
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given
away for real estate.

The solution to most of these
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problems
could be imposing
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hard
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rules
that enforces farming lands
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used
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only
for agriculture. Recently, in 2017 the
first
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rule
on this has already
been imposed
by the
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government
of India.
Further
, strengthening of these
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rules
will
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help
. Other possible solutions could be connecting the rivers of the country. This will ensure there are no droughts or floods in
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different
parts of the
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nation
. Excess water in one state could be
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used
for irrigating
next
states plants.

To summarize
, being a developing
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nation
these
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problems
are
commonly
anticipated ones; devising careful plans to control and mitigate these
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risks
would definitely
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help
the
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nation
prosper and develop in a faster pace.
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IELTS essay Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome? v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
255 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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