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Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. v.10

Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity. v. 10
Animals have been the routine specimen of human to test on medication, which is successful in the treatment for the patient as no human taking part in any guinea tests. However, some people believe that the animals can feel the pains and the boundary between what is moral or immoral in these tests is thin, that people really want to get rid the feeling out of the animals. In this essay I will delve into the both views and see the right choice for us. First of all, animal testing may sound cruel to them, but it can be a necessary sacrifice as we can protect our species. It is a fact that scientists have no moral rights to cause any discomfort or pain to the animals. How clear that reliable alternatives to animal experimentation may not always be available. Therefore, make, the less pain for the animals, in order to measure the discomfort of the tested animals, such as mice or pigs, there are actually some scientific methods that can modify the amount of specimen into them. From there, a limited amount of animal experiments can be easily controlled under human’s hands and less cruelty can create to the animals. On the other hand, these methods should be eliminated as they really put animals in severe pain. Although the animals are not developed like human, they also have an equal right to live as we. Ethical arguments have been mentioned against the animal testing, since humans have no rights to subject animals to this kind of trauma, and the lives of all creatures should be respected. If the medications move on for further development, the animals should be let alone. Instead, solutions can be included such as computerized human, patient simulators and In vitro testing, which is defined as a research using human cells and tissues, can be used. In conclusion, animals can be great experimental subjects for our medications. However, because of the ethical arguments forwards the animals, the research should be considered and replaced with alternative methods.
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test
on medication, which is successful in the treatment for the patient as no
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tests
.
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some
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people
believe that the
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animals
can feel the
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pains
and the boundary between what is moral or immoral in these
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tests
is thin, that
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people
really
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get
rid the feeling out of the
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animals
. In this essay I will delve into the both views and
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see
the
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right
choice for us.

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First of all
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animal
testing may sound cruel to them,
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but
it can be a necessary sacrifice as we can protect our species. It is a fact that scientists have no moral
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rights
to cause any discomfort or
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pain
to the
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animals
. How
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clear
that reliable alternatives to
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experimentation may not always be available.
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pain
for the
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animals
, in order to measure the discomfort of the
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tested
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animals
, such as mice or pigs, there are actually
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some
scientific methods that can modify the amount of specimen into them. From there, a limited amount of
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animal
experiments can be
easily
controlled under
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human’s hands
and less cruelty can create to the animals.

On the other hand
, these methods should
be eliminated
as they
really
put
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animals
in severe
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pain
. Although the
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animals
are not developed like
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human
, they
also
have an equal
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right
to
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live
as we. Ethical arguments have
been mentioned
against the
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animal
testing, since
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humans
have no
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rights
to subject
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animals
to this kind of trauma, and the
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lives
of all creatures should
be respected
. If the medications
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move
on for
further
development, the
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animals
should be
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let
alone.
Instead
, solutions can
be included
such as computerized
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human
, patient simulators and In
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vitro
testing, which
is defined
as a research using
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human
cells and tissues, can be
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used
.

In conclusion
,
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animals
can be great experimental subjects for our medications.
However
,
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because
of the ethical arguments forwards the
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animals
, the research should
be considered
and replaced with alternative methods.
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IELTS essay Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity. v. 10

Essay
  American English
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340 words
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