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Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. discuss both these views and give your own opinion. v.19

Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. v. 19
It is true that having a good set of friends is indispensable in life. While some think that selecting friends with common views are better, but other people think it's good to have friends with different thinking. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the arguments and support the latter view. On the one hand, those who believe that friendship with common opinions people will have feasible agreements on any decisions. This is because when friends have the same choices they will not face any disputes among themselves. For example, if a bunch of friends is planning to go for a meal, rather than discussing which restaurant they should go to, they simply opt for one place without any difficulty. In contrast, having various opinions may end up the plan into a fight. Therefore, due to these reasons friendships with common belief run smoothly. On the other hand, my view is to become friends with those who have differences in thinking that can make someone broad-minded.  This happens only if you have a friend circle with various backgrounds, which helps you to respect others' choices. To illustrate this, when your friend has opted for a different career path in order to make a future, even though you have selected another path you understand and respect this decision. However, this type of mentality could not be achieved with the same mindset friends. As a result, this type of friendship makes you respect the difference. In conclusion, Although people think to have friends with common interests will be beneficial in the long-run as there is less chance of having fights, I believe that being friends with peculiar thinking teaches you to honour their preferences because of understanding their side of perceptive.
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is indispensable in life. While
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that selecting
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with
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common
views are better,
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people
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it's
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 thinking. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the arguments and support the latter view.

On the one hand, those who believe that friendship with
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common
opinions 
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 will have feasible agreements on any decisions. This is
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because
when friends have the same choices they will not face any disputes among themselves.
For example
, if a bunch of
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friends
is planning to go for a meal,
rather
than discussing which restaurant they should go to, they
simply
opt for one place without any difficulty.
In contrast
, having various opinions may
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end
up the plan into a fight.
Therefore
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belief run
smoothly
.

On the other hand
, my view is to become
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friends
with those who have differences in thinking that can
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make
someone broad-minded.  This happens
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only
if you have a
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circle with various backgrounds, which
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helps
you to respect others' choices. To illustrate this, when your
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friend
has opted for a
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different
career path in order to
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make
a future,
even though
you have selected another path you understand and respect this decision.
However
, this type of mentality could not
be achieved
with the same mindset
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friends
.
As a result
, this type of friendship
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makes
you respect the difference.

In conclusion
, Although
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people
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to have
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with
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common
interests will be beneficial in the long-run as there is less chance of having fights, I believe that being
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friends
with peculiar thinking teaches you to
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honour
their preferences
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of understanding their side of perceptive.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. v. 19

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
283 words
8.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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