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Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. It is true that medicines and other products are routinely v.1

Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity. It is true that medicines and other products are routinely v. 1
There has been a difference of opinion regarding the use of animals for medical experiments. Although some people think that these researches should not be allowed, I would argue that the benefits are more significant. On one hand, there are clear ethical arguments against animal experimentation. The main effect is that through those practices is inevitable to harm others species. To use a common example of this, mice in the laboratory are injected with a great range of illnesses in order to measure the effectiveness of new drugs. As a result, hundreds of them die in the process. Furthermore, the belief that benefits to human do not justify the suffering caused, will be always present. Indeed, opponents of such investigations argue that humans have no right to subject animals to this kind of trauma and the lives of all creatures should be respected. Despite those arguments mentioned above still cannot overshadow the advantages brought to mankind. Firstly, reliable alternatives to animal experimentation are not currently available. In fact, there is no such better way nowadays to test new drugs and medicines, and without it, a great number of humans would have died each year. And most importantly, if we were not used such inventions such as antibiotics, vaccines, among others, the human race would have not advanced in the health care system. For this reason, is necessary to keep making efforts in this area which is vital for the mankind`s development. By way of conclusion, even there are strong ideas to banning animal experimentation, I believe that those kinds of researches are indispensable for humanity.
There has been a difference of opinion regarding the
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of
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animals
for medical experiments. Although
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some
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people
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think
that these researches should not be
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allowed
, I would argue that the benefits are more significant.

On one hand, there are
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clear
ethical arguments against
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animal
experimentation. The main effect is that through those practices is inevitable to harm others species. To
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use
a common example of this, mice in the laboratory
are injected
with a great range of illnesses in order to measure the effectiveness of new drugs.
As a result
, hundreds of them
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die
in the process.
Furthermore
, the belief that benefits to
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human
do not justify the suffering caused, will be always present.
Indeed
, opponents of such investigations argue that
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humans
have no right to subject
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
animals
to this kind of trauma and the
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lives
of all creatures should
be respected
.

Despite those arguments mentioned above
still
cannot overshadow the advantages brought to mankind.
Firstly
, reliable alternatives to
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animal
experimentation are not
currently
available. In fact, there is no such better way nowadays to
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test
new drugs and medicines, and without it, a great number of
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humans
would have
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died
each year. And most
importantly
, if we were not
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used
such inventions such as antibiotics, vaccines, among others, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
human
race would have not advanced in the health care system.
For this reason
, is necessary to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
making efforts in this area which is vital for the
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mankind`s
development.

By way of conclusion, even there are strong
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ideas
to banning
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
animal
experimentation, I believe that those kinds of researches are indispensable for humanity.
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IELTS essay Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity. It is true that medicines and other products are routinely v. 1

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