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Nowadays a lot of young people use social media. do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? v.2

In this fast-paced world, social networking sites are becoming a major part of mankind's life, but it influences all age groups, and most teenagers are spending a plethoras timing. People are able to connect with their friends, family members and they are also sharing documents, pictures, and so on. I believe that the merits of social media outweigh the demerits. [2/2, 9: 30 AM] H@®dik: First of all, Applications cause various benefits for the users. To commence with, civilians can make a good network from this and they can get information regarding the job, study and many other things. Another valid point is that man around the world can connect. To exemplify this point there are some sites like Facebook, Whatsapp, and many others they can easily communicate and connect with his colleague and family members.

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