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Newspapers have an enormous influence on people’s ideas and opinions. Why? Is this a positive or negative situation? v.1

Newspapers have an enormous influence on people’s ideas and opinions. Why? Is this a positive or negative situation? v. 1
The phenomenal influence of newspapers on human perspective is widely awareness. There are raising questions of why such a trend is happened and whether it is a negative or positive one. For the first question, it is my belief that due to the tremendous demand of getting updated about the world around of people, newspapers can have such an impact. Since it has been the most traditional way of updating news for people for centuries, the majority rather confide in it than some social media. This is how certain opinion and idea is implied and spread among people, and to me, such a trend having both positive and negative aspects. On the one hand, everyone can read news with newspaper. it is hard for elderly people to check on the news on digital devices because not all of them know how to interact with those devices, so newspaper seems to be a better choice for those aged citizens. On the other hand, it can mislead people with fake news and unqualified information. The president of the United States, whose name Donald Trump has given a warning about such a possibility regarding the fake news related to him during his presidential campaign in 2016. Or in Vietnam, some targets have been charged for spreading the fake news about some diseases that scarring the society. Furthermore, each newspaper has a unique perspective on specific issues, and many relying on such. By virtue of that, certain group of people will be misjudged. For instance, some presidential candidates using newspaper as an effective tool for their campaign, and if the citizens rely on those sources to vote, they may elect the wrong person to work for the country. In conclusion, I deem that the impact of newspaper on the citizens’ point of view have both advantages and disadvantages. However, for all the reasons mentioned above, the disadvantages have outweighed its advantages.
The phenomenal influence of
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newspapers
on human perspective is
widely
awareness. There are raising questions of why such a trend
is happened
and whether it is a
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negative
or
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positive
one.

For the
first
question, it is my belief that due to the tremendous demand of getting updated about the world around of
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people
,
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newspapers
can have such an impact. Since it has been the most traditional way of updating
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news
for
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people
for centuries, the majority
rather
confide in it than
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some
social media. This is how certain opinion and
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idea
is implied
and spread among
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people
, and to me, such a trend having both
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positive
and
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negative
aspects.

On the one hand, everyone can read
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news
with
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newspaper
.
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it
is
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hard
for elderly
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people
to
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check
on the
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news
on digital devices
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because
not all of them know how to interact with those devices,
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so
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newspaper
seems to be a better choice for those aged citizens.
On the other hand
, it can mislead
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people
with fake
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news
and unqualified information. The
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president of the United States
, whose name Donald Trump has
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given
a warning about such a possibility regarding the fake
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news
related to him during his presidential campaign in 2016. Or in Vietnam,
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some
targets have
been charged
for spreading the fake
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news
about
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some
diseases that scarring the society.
Furthermore
, each
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newspaper
has a unique perspective on specific issues, and
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many
relying on such. By virtue of that, certain group of
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people
will
be misjudged
.
For instance
,
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some
presidential candidates using
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newspaper
as an effective tool for their campaign, and if the citizens rely on those sources to vote, they may elect the
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wrong
person to work for the country.

In conclusion
, I deem that the impact of
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newspaper
on the citizens’ point of view have both advantages and disadvantages.
However
, for all the reasons mentioned above, the disadvantages have outweighed its advantages.
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IELTS essay Newspapers have an enormous influence on people’s ideas and opinions. Why? Is this a positive or negative situation? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
317 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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