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Newspaper will remain the main source of getting news in the and Internet will not have any effect. Do you agree of disagree with the given statement? Give resins for your answer and include relevant examples. v.2

Newspaper will remain the main source of getting news in the and Internet will not have any effect. Give resins for your answer and include relevant examples. v. 2
Newspaper is called the mirror of every society in this modern context. Presently, it is argued that newspapers will remain on the top of the table in case of getting news and it’s prevalence will not be affected at all by the Internet. I intend to discord with the given statement firmly and some logical points will be described in the upcoming paragraphs. There are manifold points to shore up my point of view. First and the foremost, unlike newspaper, attaining news from the Internet is more reliable, economical and the fastest way. Internet, for example, makes it possible to watch the audio visual coverage of the news. This facility, indeed, makes getting news more interesting and easy to understand. In addition, the availability of recent updates or breaking news on Internet is as fast as lightening, simultaneously economical too, if comparing to newspaper. Needless to say, the importance of newspaper will be thrown at the back seat by the e-services in terms of having news. Further emphasising on my point of view, people who are supposed to be as busy as bee may not have time to buy a newspaper from the market in the future. As a result, it is quite obvious that their preference for receiving news will be shifted from newspaper to Internet as it is accessible in the portable devices such as mobiles and tabs anywhere anytime. Last but not least, the amenities such as notifications for some special news, changing fonts, brightness, adjusting colour contrast provided by Internet also snatch the monopoly of newspaper. To recapitulate, there is no doubt that newspaper has been dominating as the major source of new for many decades. However, forthcoming years are turning to be the era of digitalisation and the use of Internet will be widespread in every domain.
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Newspaper
is called
the mirror of every society in this modern context.
Presently
, it
is argued
that
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newspapers
will remain on the top of the table in case of getting
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news
and it’s prevalence will not be
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affected
at all by the Internet. I intend to discord with the
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given
statement
firmly
and
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some
logical
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points
will be
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described
in the upcoming paragraphs.

There are manifold
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points
to shore up my
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point
of view.
First
and the foremost, unlike
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newspaper
, attaining
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news
from the Internet is more reliable, economical and the fastest way. Internet,
for example
,
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makes
it possible to
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watch
the audio visual coverage of the
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news
. This facility,
indeed
,
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makes
getting
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news
more interesting and easy to understand.
In addition
, the availability of recent updates or breaking
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news
on Internet is as
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fast
as lightening,
simultaneously
economical too, if comparing to
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newspaper
. Needless to say, the importance of
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newspaper
will
be thrown
at the back seat by the e-services in terms of having news.

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Further
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emphasising
on my
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point
of view,
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people
who
are supposed
to be as busy as bee may not have time to
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buy
a
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newspaper
from the market in the future.
As a result
, it is quite obvious that their preference for receiving
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news
will
be shifted
from
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newspaper
to Internet as it is accessible in the portable devices such as mobiles and tabs anywhere anytime. Last
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but
not least, the amenities such as notifications for
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some
special
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news
, changing fonts, brightness, adjusting
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colour
contrast provided by Internet
also
snatch the monopoly of newspaper.

To recapitulate, there is no doubt that
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newspaper
has been dominating as the major source of
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new
for
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many
decades.
However
, forthcoming years are turning to be the era of
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digitalisation
and the
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use
of Internet will be widespread in every domain.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
20Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS essay Newspaper will remain the main source of getting news in the and Internet will not have any effect. Give resins for your answer and include relevant examples. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
302 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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