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News media are important in modern society. Why are they so important? Are their influences generally positive or negative? v.1

News media are important in modern society. Why are they so important? Are their influences generally positive or negative? v. 1
In modern society, the general tendency has been that news media plays an essential role more and more in our life. Several related reasons, as well as the pros and cons of that issue, have been debated upon and this essay will tackle the most important ones. First and foremost, among the numerous reasons for the problem above, the most remarkable one is that human beings can easily update more information all over the world through TV, radio, newspaper or the Internet. For example, online newspapers are updated almost with all information in every view such as economy, society and education. Besides, there are various professions’ information like farmers, entrepreneurs, workers, teachers and so on, which people can get them not only good news but also bad news all day long. Another reason is the human connection with their world. People can know what is happening around them, helping them have more topics to discuss with others that increase the connection between people. If people just spend their daily life on eating, working and sleeping without getting more news, their life will become closed and boring even society will return to prehistoric times. Then, the most obvious gain of the circumstance is it creates favorable conditions for people to know difficult circumstances in society, which is a bridge for people to share together, helping society grow more and more. However, the more communication channels appear, the more untrustworthy news are given. Currently, there is too many news on unreliable newspapers that give false news, making people are missed their understand. Furthermore, content plagiarism in newspapers is also increasing significantly in recent years, making non-serious journalists violate the law. For instant, In Vietnam, we can easily recognize that when we read online newspapers. Although the titles are different, the contents are the same on many pages without the specific author's name or citations line. To sum up, it is imperative to thoroughly examine both merits and demerits of news media are indispensable in modern life. Furthermore, the negative effects still overweighs the benefits.
In modern
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society
, the general tendency has been that
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news
media plays an essential role more and more in our
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life
. Several related reasons,
as well
as the pros and cons of that issue, have
been debated
upon and this essay will tackle the most
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important
ones.

First
and foremost, among the numerous reasons for the problem above, the most remarkable one is that human beings can
easily
update more information all over the world through TV, radio,
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newspaper
or the Internet.
For example
, online
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newspapers
are updated
almost with all information in every view such as economy,
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society
and education.
Besides
, there are various professions’ information like farmers, entrepreneurs, workers, teachers and
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so
on, which
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people
can
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get
them not
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only
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good
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news
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but
also
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bad
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news
all day long. Another reason is the human connection with their world.
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People
can know what is happening around them, helping them have more topics to discuss with others that increase the
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connection between
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people
. If
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people
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just
spend their daily
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life
on eating, working and sleeping without getting more
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news
, their
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life
will become closed and boring even
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society
will return to prehistoric times.

Then, the most obvious gain of the circumstance is it creates favorable conditions for
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people
to know difficult circumstances in
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society
, which is a bridge for
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people
to share together, helping
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society
grow more and more.
However
, the more communication channels appear, the more untrustworthy
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news
are
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given
.
Currently
, there is too
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many
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news
on unreliable
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newspapers
that give false
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news
, making
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people
are missed
their
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understand
.
Furthermore
, content plagiarism in
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newspapers
is
also
increasing
significantly
in recent years, making non-serious journalists violate the law. For instant, In Vietnam, we can
easily
recognize that when we read online
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newspapers
. Although the titles are
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different
, the contents are the same on
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many
pages without the specific author's name or citations line.

To sum up, it is imperative to
thoroughly
examine both merits and demerits of
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news
media are indispensable in modern
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life
.
Furthermore
, the
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negative
effects
still
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overweighs
the benefits.
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29Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay News media are important in modern society. Why are they so important? Are their influences generally positive or negative? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
342 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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