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News and media are important in modern society. Why are they so important? Are their influences generally positive or negative? v.1

News and media are important in modern society. Why are they so important? Are their influences generally positive or negative? v. 1
People are now living in the information technology era with an open world where news and media play an essential part in human lives. The reason why they are indispensable in society as well as their impacts will be analyzed in this essay. The significance of news and media can be said thanks to the amount of information provided to the population. For a long time, news has been considered as an effective communication method for a majority of residents to stay updated with what is happening around. In other words, people will be informed of not only domestic news but also international affairs, which helps them open a new horizon of knowledge without traveling. Take tourism news or TV hospitality programs as an example. For some who have limited time and budget for excursions, they might be still able to have an overview of picturesque destinations as well as cognition about the local life of the places where they desire to reach without putting steps on. Despite the values of news and media, their effects are a double-edged sword. The positive side may be the right orientation for the readers and the public. This is likely to be true for health news when instructing people how to self-protect accurately and efficiently in an epidemic outbreak for example. However, the opposite side cannot be ignored. As the boom of news and media, if human beings are irresponsible to get news without the concern about sources, they can read fake news. This should be taken into account as a threat to national security as well as other aspects such as business due to the confusion led to the community. In conclusion, news and media are still a vital element in the majority. To make use of these sources of communication, each individual should be smart to evaluate both pros and cons.
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People
are
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now
living in the information technology era with an open world where
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news
and
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media
play an essential part in human
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lives
. The reason why they are indispensable in society
as well
as their impacts will
be analyzed
in this essay.

The significance of
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news
and
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media
can
be said
thanks to the amount of information provided to the population. For a long time,
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news
has
been considered
as an effective communication method for a majority of residents to stay updated with what is happening around.
In other words
,
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people
will
be informed
of not
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only
domestic
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news
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but
also
international affairs, which
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helps
them open a
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new
horizon of knowledge without traveling. Take tourism
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news
or TV hospitality programs as an example. For
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
who have limited time and budget for excursions, they might be
still
able to have an overview of picturesque destinations
as well
as cognition about the local life of the places where they desire to reach without putting steps on.

Despite the values of
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news
and
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media
, their effects are a double-edged sword. The
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
side may be the right orientation for the readers and the public. This is likely to be true for health
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news
when instructing
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
how to self-protect
accurately
and
efficiently
in an epidemic outbreak
for example
.
However
, the opposite side cannot be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ignored
. As the boom of
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news
and
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media
, if human beings are irresponsible to
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get
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news
without the concern about sources, they can read fake
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news
. This should
be taken
into account as a threat to national security
as well
as other aspects such as business due to the confusion led to the community.

In conclusion
,
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news
and
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media
are
still
a vital element in the majority. To
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make
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use
of these sources of communication, each individual should be smart to evaluate both pros and cons.
14Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
17Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS essay News and media are important in modern society. Why are they so important? Are their influences generally positive or negative? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
310 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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