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Motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances but they also cause problems. What are the problems of motorways and what solutions are there? v.5

Motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances but they also cause problems. What are the problems of motorways and what solutions are there? v. 5
Nowadays some people try to avoid travelling by plane or train. They prefer cars so as to manage their travel freely. Motorways advantaged to help drivers to get to destinations quickly. However, it causes  set some problems like destroying vegetation and help in emergency situations. This essay is going to present these problems and solutions for them. At first, let's discuss why motorways become more dangerous for journeys. First reason, there are not enough roadway signs with appropriate speed limits. We used to see lane signs  every corner in cities, but in motorways you cannot face them frequently. So, without alarm speed limit marker drivers try overtake others or add speed, it gives rise to accidents and heavy traffics. The solution for this problem can be more than one. For instance, setting up especial lane signs about speed limits, patrol and sensors for controlling them. Also, it is better to punish drivers who will try to break the rules. In addition to the information below in Motorways are not specializing to emergency situation and first-aid. For example, if drivers got into the accident,   he would not get help minutely or if his car ran out of petrol, he would wait till other drivers decide to help him. In fact, these problems seem insignificant, but it is an important set up emergency equipment: petrol station. Special areas for primary care of charging or signals. At last, in order to build motorway builders destroy the environment. As we can observe in roadway edge not many plants. We know that vegetation important to avoid air pollution, so companies responsible for this should pay attention to the surrounding area, the same way they should avoid special green zones with rare species of animals. To summarize, more motorways very convenient on the other hand, it has the disadvantaged such as destroying vegetation. In this essay I will try to present all possible solutions. Hopefully in the future government will pay attention improving idea of motorways.
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some
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people
try to avoid travelling by
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plane
or train. They prefer cars
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so as to
manage their travel
freely
. Motorways advantaged to
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help
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drivers
to
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get
to destinations
quickly
.
However
, it causes
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set
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some
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problems
like destroying vegetation and
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help
in emergency situations. This essay is going to present these
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problems
and solutions for them. At
first
,
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let
's discuss why motorways become more
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dangerous
for journeys.
First
reason, there are not
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enough
roadway signs with appropriate
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speed
limits. We
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used
to
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see
lane signs
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every corner in cities,
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but
in motorways you cannot face them
frequently
.
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So
, without alarm
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speed
limit marker
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drivers
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try overtake
others or
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add
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speed
, it gives rise to accidents and heavy traffics. The solution for this
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problem
can be more than one.
For instance
, setting up especial lane signs about
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speed
limits, patrol and sensors for controlling them.
Also
, it is better to punish
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drivers
who will try to break the
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rules
.
In addition
to the information below in Motorways are not specializing to emergency situation and
first
-aid.
For example
, if
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drivers
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got
into the accident,
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he would not
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get
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help
minutely
or if his car ran out of petrol, he would wait till other
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drivers
decide to
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help
him. In fact, these
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problems
seem insignificant,
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but
it is an
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important
set up emergency equipment: petrol station. Special areas for primary care of charging or signals. At last, in order to build motorway builders
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destroy
the environment.
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As
we can observe in roadway edge not
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many
plants. We know that vegetation
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important
to avoid air pollution,
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so
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companies
responsible for this should pay attention to the surrounding area, the same way they should avoid special green zones with rare species of animals.

To summarize
, more motorways
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very
convenient
on the other hand
, it has the disadvantaged such as destroying vegetation. In this essay I will try to present all possible solutions.
Hopefully
in the future
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government
will pay attention improving
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idea
of motorways.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
17Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes
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IELTS essay Motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances but they also cause problems. What are the problems of motorways and what solutions are there? v. 5

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
331 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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