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motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances but they also cause problems. what are the problems of motorways and what solutions are there? v.3

motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances but they also cause problems. what are the problems of motorways and what solutions are there? v. 3
It is obvious that the number of different means of transport has been increasing rapidly these days, also highways are being expanded everywhere. Although motorways allow drivers to travel comfortably and shorten the long distance, there are also a range of significant problems. This essay will discuss some of these problems in detail, and then propose some corresponding solutions. One of the major problems that motorways bring is accidents because of traveling at high speed, particularly in bad weather or at crossroads. In Germany, for instance, more than half of the total length of the Autobahn highways has no speed limit, this means that some cars with extremely powerful engines can reach a speed of over 300 km/h. As a result, many serious accidents might happen and cause severe damages to people and vehicles. To solve this situation, the government should set speed limits for each kind of vehicle, exhibit traffic signs, and tighten the permission of driving license. It is undeniable that air and noise pollution should be considered as worth mentioning issues. The exhaust fumes from vehicles could cause air pollution, and as a consequence, people are increasingly suffering from respiratory diseases such as pneumonia or asthma. Also, due to the enormous increase in engines’ sound and car honks, noise pollution might lead to some physical and mental illnesses including sleep disorder, depression, or even hearing-impaired situations. These problems could be dealt with by constructing freeways far away from residential areas and manufacturing environmentally-friendly vehicles. In conclusion, although it is clear that highways cause a variety of problems, these issues are undoubtedly possible to be tackled.
It is obvious that the number of
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different
means of transport has been increasing
rapidly
these days,
also
highways are
being expanded
everywhere. Although motorways
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allow
drivers to travel
comfortably
and shorten the long distance, there are
also
a range of significant
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problems
. This essay will discuss
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some
of these
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problems
in detail, and then propose
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some
corresponding solutions.

One of the major
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problems
that motorways bring is accidents
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because
of traveling at high
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speed
,
particularly
in
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bad
weather or at crossroads. In Germany,
for instance
, more than half of the total length of the Autobahn highways has no
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speed
limit, this means that
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some
cars with
extremely
powerful engines can reach a
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speed
of over 300 km/h.
As a result
,
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many
serious accidents might happen and cause severe damages to
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people
and vehicles. To solve this situation, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
should set
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
speed
limits for each kind of vehicle, exhibit traffic signs, and tighten the permission of driving license.

It is undeniable that air and noise pollution should
be considered
as worth mentioning issues. The exhaust fumes from vehicles could cause air pollution, and as a consequence,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
are
increasingly
suffering from respiratory diseases such as pneumonia or asthma.
Also
, due to the enormous increase in engines’ sound and car honks, noise pollution might lead to
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some
physical and mental illnesses including sleep disorder, depression, or even hearing-impaired situations. These
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problems
could
be dealt
with by constructing freeways far away from residential areas and manufacturing
environmentally
-friendly vehicles.

In conclusion
, although it is
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clear
that highways cause a variety of
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problems
, these issues are
undoubtedly
possible to
be tackled
.
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IELTS essay motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances but they also cause problems. what are the problems of motorways and what solutions are there? v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
268 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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