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Education is not a luxury, but a basic human right and as such should be free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth. Do you agree or disagree? v.5

Education is not a luxury, but a basic human right and as such should be free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth. v. 5
Education is what differentiates us from other living beings on earth. It makes man the smartest creature on earth. There is always an argument like education is a luxury or it is a right for everyone, do everyone needs to educated for free or not. In my personal opinion, a quality education should be provided for everyone without any cost. Providing education as free for everyone has a lot of merits. Through the proper quality education people will be more talented and responsible citizens. The students from the poor family receive the same education as the student from a rich family. The knowledge transferred to them will be the same. This creates an equality among students in fact, among the future generation. To highlight this equality, we have the school uniforms where, everyone will be threaded as same. Free quality education should be provided for all. If the education is not provided for free, there will be a huge imbalance in the country. Proper education may not be falling into the hands of the right talent. People who are rich enough to pay the huge tuition fees, may not be the one who is much interested in studies, but there are poor people out there who are intelligent but unable to pay. If this system continuous, the country will be losing so many smart people who might have made the country feel proud. In conclusion, knowledge transfer for the future generation should not be based on the penny in his/ her parents’ pocket. Right to get educated for free should be one of the human rights. Thus, this help the country to build itself rather than depending on other countries. Well educated citizens are one the best asset that the country can own.
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man
the smartest creature on earth. There is always an argument like
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education
is a luxury or it is a
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everyone
, do
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everyone
needs to educated for
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education
should
be provided
for
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everyone
without any cost.

Providing
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as
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free
for
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everyone
has
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a lot of
merits. Through the proper quality
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education
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people
will be more talented and responsible citizens. The students from the poor family receive the same
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education
as the student from a rich family. The knowledge transferred to them will be the same. This creates an equality among students in fact, among the future generation. To highlight this equality, we have the school uniforms where,
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everyone
will
be threaded
as same.
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quality
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education
should
be provided
for all.

If the
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is not provided for
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, there will be a huge imbalance in the
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country
. Proper
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may not be falling into the hands of the
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talent.
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are rich
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to pay the huge tuition fees, may not be the one
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there are poor
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out there
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unable to pay. If this system continuous, the
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country
will be losing
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smart
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might have made the
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country
feel proud.

In conclusion
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be based
on the penny in his/ her parents’ pocket.
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Right
to
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get
educated for
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free
should be one of the human
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rights
.
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, this
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help
the
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country
to build itself
rather
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countries
.
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3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
37Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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If you talk to a man in a language he understands, that goes to his head. If you talk to him in his own language, that goes to his heart.
Nelson Mandela

IELTS essay Education is not a luxury, but a basic human right and as such should be free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth. v. 5

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
293 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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