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Motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances but they also cause problems. What are the problems of motorways and what solutions are there? v.14

Motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances but they also cause problems. What are the problems of motorways and what solutions are there? v. 14
At present days some people try to avoid travelling by plane or train. They prefer cars to manage their travel freely. Motorways advantaged to help drivers to get to destinations quickly. However, it causes set some problems like destroying vegetation and help in an emergency situation. This essay will present these problems and solutions for them. At first, let's discuss why motorways become more dangerous for journeys. Practically  there have not enough road signs with speed limits. We used to see the roadway signs every corner in the cities, but on the motorways you cannot face them frequently. So, without alarming speed limit drivers will try to overtake others or add speed, it gives rise to accidents and heavy traffics. The solution for this problem can be more than one. For instance, setting up special way signs about speed limits, patrol and sensors for controlling them. Also, it is better to punish drivers who will try to break the rules. In addition to the information above the next drawback is that motorways do not specialized to emergency situation and first aid. For example, if drivers got into the accident, he would not get help minutely or if his car ran out of petrol, he would wait till other drivers help him. In fact, these problems seem insignificant, but it's important setting up emergency equipment: petrol station, special areas of primary care and SOS phones. At last, in order to build motorway builders destroy the environment, because of that we can observe in lane edge few plants. We know that vegetation important to avoid air pollution. So companies responsible for roadway should pay attention to the surrounding area, the same way they should avoid special green zones with rare species of animals. To summarize, as it was mentioned above more motorways are very convenient, on the other hand, they have the disadvantages such as destroyed vegetation. All possible solutions were presented in this essay and hopefully the government will pay attention to improve motorways.
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some
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people
try to avoid travelling by
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plane
or train. They prefer cars to manage their travel
freely
. Motorways advantaged to
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help
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drivers
to
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get
to destinations
quickly
.
However
, it causes set
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some
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problems
like destroying vegetation and
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help
in an emergency situation. This essay will present these
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problems
and solutions for them.

At
first
,
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let
's discuss why motorways become more
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dangerous
for journeys.
Practically
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there have not
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enough
road signs with
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speed
limits. We
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used
to
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see
the roadway signs every corner in the cities,
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but
on the motorways you cannot face them
frequently
.
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So
, without alarming
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speed
limit
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drivers
will try to overtake others or
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add
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speed
, it gives rise to accidents and heavy traffics. The solution for this
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problem
can be more than one.
For instance
, setting up special way signs about
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speed
limits, patrol and sensors for controlling them.
Also
, it is better to punish
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drivers
who will try to break the
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rules
.

In addition
to the information above the
next
drawback is that motorways do not specialized to emergency situation and
first
aid.
For example
, if
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drivers
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got
into the accident, he would not
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get
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help
minutely
or if his car ran out of petrol, he would wait till other
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drivers
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help
him. In fact, these
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problems
seem insignificant,
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but
it's
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important
setting up emergency equipment: petrol station, special areas of primary care and SOS phones.

At last, in order to build motorway builders
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destroy
the environment,
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because
of that we can observe in lane edge few plants. We know that vegetation
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important
to avoid air pollution.
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So
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companies
responsible for roadway should pay attention to the surrounding area, the same way they should avoid special green zones with rare species of animals.

To summarize
, as it
was mentioned
above more motorways are
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very
convenient,
on the other hand
, they have the disadvantages such as
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destroyed
vegetation. All possible solutions
were presented
in this essay and
hopefully
the
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government
will pay attention to
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improve
motorways.
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IELTS essay Motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances but they also cause problems. What are the problems of motorways and what solutions are there? v. 14

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
333 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
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Lexical Resource: 8.0
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Task Achievement: 8.0
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