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Most people accept that we now live in a globalization world but not everyone agrees that this is beneficial. To what extent is globalization a positive and negative development? v.1

Most people accept that we now live in a globalization world but not everyone agrees that this is beneficial. v. 1
TECHNOLOGY ENHANCEMENT MADE HUMAN LIFE EFFORTLESS THAN EVER BEFORE AND THIS CHANGE WOULD CONTINUE FURTHER TOO. HENCE, NO ONATION IS LEFT OF MISSING THE OTHER CULTURE AS EVERYTHING IS AVAIOLABLE AROUND THE GLOBE DUE TO THE PRESENCE OF E-COMMERCE. THIS ESSAY WILL TOTALLY BELIEVE THAT IT CHANCE SHOULD BE TREATED AS OPTIMISTIC OUTCOME RATHER THAN PESSIMISTIC. FIRSLTY, THIS ESSAY WHY IT IS POSITIVE REVOLUTION WITH SPECIFIC REASON AND EXPLAINATION WITH SUPPORT OF EXAMLES. ON THE ONE HAND, THE MAJOR POSITIVE IMPACT IS ON THE NATION'S ECONOMY OF BOTH THE TERRITORY. WHEN ONE PERSON IS APART FROM HOME COUNTRY, THEN THAT TIME ONE IS ABLE TO ACCESS THE PRODUCT THROUGH ONLINE BUYING SITE. AS A RESULT, THIS ONLINE PAYMENT TAKES IMPORT CHARGES FROM BUYER AND EXPORT CHARGES AS WELL. THIS MONEY GOES TO THE GOVERNMENT OF BOTH THE NATION. FOR INSTANCE, AS PER THE INDIAN GROCERY STORES INPORT EXPORT REPORT REVEALED THAT 80% OF THE INDIAN CIVILIAN NOW ABLE TO HAVE THEIR INDIN FOOD ANYWHERE IN THE GLOBE DUE TO THE INTERNET BUSIINESS. SO, THAY DO NOT FEEL AS THEY ARE AWAY FROM THIER HOME CONTINENT. ADDITIONALLY, PRODUCT AVAILIBILITY ANYHERE IN THE WORLD PROVIODES AN EMPLOYEMENT FOR MANY PEOPLE WHO ARE JOBLESS. THUS, THERE WOULBE BE LOWER UNMPLOYEMENT RATE IN THE NATION. AS TO MAKE AVAILABLE EVERYTHOING AROUND THE WORLD NEEDS A WORKER WHO HAS PASSION IN BUSINESS AND HAVE STRONG CRITICALL THINKING SKILL. FOR INSTANCE, NEWLY OPENED STORE IN THE FOREIGN COUNTRY PROVIDES AN OPPORTUNITY FOR THE CIVILIAN TO WORK IN AND MAKE FINCIAL STABILITY STRONGER. IN CONCLUSION, EASY EVERY PRODUCT ASSECC INDEED MAKE HAZZLE FREE LIVING AROUND THE WORLD FOR THE FOREIGN NATIONALS. BUT, THERE SHPULD BE SOME TO PROTECT THE ENVRONMENT AS IT MIGHT AFFECT THE SURROUNDOING THORUGH THE IMPORT BUSINESS.
TECHNOLOGY ENHANCEMENT MADE HUMAN LIFE
EFFORTLESS
THAN EVER
BEFORE
AND THIS
CHANGE
WOULD CONTINUE
FURTHER
TOO.
HENCE
, NO
ONATION
IS
LEFT
OF MISSING THE OTHER CULTURE AS EVERYTHING IS
AVAIOLABLE
AROUND THE GLOBE DUE TO THE PRESENCE OF E-COMMERCE. THIS ESSAY WILL
TOTALLY
BELIEVE THAT IT CHANCE SHOULD
BE TREATED
AS OPTIMISTIC OUTCOME
RATHER
THAN PESSIMISTIC.
FIRSLTY
, THIS ESSAY WHY IT IS
POSITIVE
REVOLUTION WITH SPECIFIC REASON AND
EXPLAINATION
WITH SUPPORT OF
EXAMLES
.

ON THE ONE HAND, THE MAJOR
POSITIVE
IMPACT IS ON THE NATION'S ECONOMY OF BOTH THE TERRITORY. WHEN ONE PERSON IS APART FROM HOME COUNTRY, THEN THAT TIME ONE IS ABLE TO ACCESS THE PRODUCT THROUGH ONLINE BUYING SITE.
AS A RESULT
, THIS ONLINE PAYMENT TAKES IMPORT CHARGES FROM BUYER AND EXPORT CHARGES
AS WELL
. THIS MONEY GOES TO THE
GOVERNMENT
OF BOTH THE NATION.
FOR INSTANCE
, AS PER THE INDIAN GROCERY STORES
INPORT
EXPORT REPORT REVEALED THAT 80% OF THE INDIAN CIVILIAN
NOW
ABLE TO HAVE THEIR
INDIN
FOOD ANYWHERE IN THE GLOBE DUE TO THE INTERNET
BUSIINESS
.
SO
,
THAY
DO NOT FEEL AS THEY ARE AWAY FROM
THIER
HOME CONTINENT.

ADDITIONALLY
, PRODUCT
AVAILIBILITY
ANYHERE
IN THE WORLD
PROVIODES
AN
EMPLOYEMENT
FOR
MANY
PEOPLE
WHO ARE JOBLESS.
THUS
, THERE
WOULBE
BE LOWER
UNMPLOYEMENT
RATE IN THE NATION. AS TO
MAKE
AVAILABLE
EVERYTHOING
AROUND THE WORLD NEEDS A WORKER WHO HAS PASSION IN BUSINESS AND HAVE STRONG
CRITICALL
THINKING
SKILL
.
FOR INSTANCE
,
NEWLY
OPENED STORE IN THE FOREIGN COUNTRY PROVIDES AN OPPORTUNITY FOR THE CIVILIAN TO WORK IN AND
MAKE
FINCIAL
STABILITY STRONGER.

IN CONCLUSION
, EASY EVERY PRODUCT
ASSECC
INDEED
MAKE
HAZZLE
FREE LIVING AROUND THE WORLD FOR THE FOREIGN NATIONALS.
BUT
, THERE
SHPULD
BE
SOME
TO PROTECT THE
ENVRONMENT
AS IT MIGHT AFFECT THE
SURROUNDOING
THORUGH
THE IMPORT BUSINESS.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
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IELTS essay Most people accept that we now live in a globalization world but not everyone agrees that this is beneficial. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
293 words
7.5
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