Nowadays, the world’s population has been increased drastically, that’s the way the some people believe that to provide rehabilitation to them in the countryside is not a good option. In my opinion, I support this as the countryside is a source for the food of the people and home for the animals.
To begin with, one of the important reasons to prevent the countryside is that it provides a space for the agriculture where food are grown which will be served to the person living in the urban areas. This area will be used for building of a new home then this growing of crops will be shifted to some other area; it may increase the cost of crops and vegetables. For instance, Research conducted shows that those urban areas whose nearby region does not contain the countryside than person can get food in such a place is costly. As a result, countryside provides the food source to the nearest urban area, so people can live a healthy and happy life.
Secondly, such places are the home for the animals where they can live and get their food easily, so there is no danger to their survival. But if such places are used for the new home, then there is no place for their living and they start to enter the cities where people lives which will create a situation which generate danger for both of them. For example, research conducted shows that wild animals number has been detrimental because there would be no space available for their living. At last, to maintain an ecosystem the countryside plays an important role which helps to human as well the animals.
To conclude, while in the urban areas there is no space for the new homes so the countryside is the best option, but the countryside can be used as to grow the crop and animals to live then it would be best utilized. The government should also support this activity.
Nowadays, the world’s population has
been increased
drastically
, that’s the way the
some
people
believe that to provide rehabilitation to them in the
countryside
is not a
good
option. In my opinion, I support this as the
countryside
is a source for the
food
of the
people
and home for the animals.
To
begin
with, one of the
important
reasons to
prevent
the
countryside
is that it provides a space for the agriculture where
food
are grown
which will
be served
to the person living in the
urban
areas
. This
area
will be
used
for building of a new home then this growing of crops will
be shifted
to
some
other
area
; it may increase the cost of crops and vegetables.
For instance
, Research conducted
shows
that those
urban
areas
whose nearby region does not contain the
countryside
than person can
get
food
in such a
place
is costly.
As a result
,
countryside
provides the
food
source to the nearest
urban
area
,
so
people
can
live
a healthy and happy life.
Secondly
, such
places
are the home for the animals where they can
live
and
get
their
food
easily
,
so
there is no
danger
to their survival.
But
if such
places
are
used
for the new home, then there is no
place
for their
living and
they
start
to enter the cities where
people
lives
which will create a situation which generate
danger
for both of them.
For example
, research conducted
shows
that wild animals number has been detrimental
because
there would be no space available for their living. At last, to maintain an ecosystem the
countryside
plays an
important
role which
helps
to human
as well
the animals.
To conclude
, while in the
urban
areas
there is no space for the new
homes
so
the
countryside
is the best option,
but
the
countryside
can be
used
as to grow the crop and animals to
live
then it would be best utilized. The
government
should
also
support this activity.
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