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Many people today user their phone for sending text more than talking. What are the reason for this? Are there more advantage then disadvantage? v.1

Many people today user their phone for sending text more than talking. What are the reason for this? Are there more advantage then disadvantage? v. 1
A Mobile phone is one of the greatest advancement of modern technology. It makes our life easier with its feature. Texting messages is the most popular feature now a day specially for young generation. But sometimes it has some disadvantage in real life solution. Sometimes, there are certain places which do not allow to make a call or talk over the phone. At this situation texting is the best solution. User can easily text message to receive without making any noise or giving irritation to his or her next person. Also, texting is a short process to communicate others and cost effective. It is quite cheaper rather than make a call. For example, there are some application like Facebook, Whatsapp which allow people to text messages to another without any prone or problem of grammatical failure, and for this there is no extra charge required. On the other hand, there is no intrusive face in texting. The recipient has fully right whenever he or she want to reply messages. Though, there are lots of advantages of texting, also it has some disadvantages. Teens these days are used to texting more than make a call which is not useful to create a genuine bond such relationship with parents, friends or teachers. Within talking people can be more frequent and understandable than texting. It is easy to share emotion through talking. To conclude, text message has several advantages as compared to its drawback. Also, it is easier to basic information exchanges which is one of the main reasons why people are used to texting, but call is good for connection or actual conversation.
A Mobile phone is one of the greatest advancement of modern technology. It
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our life easier with its feature. Texting
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messages
is the most popular feature
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for young generation.
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sometimes
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disadvantage in real life solution.

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, there are certain places which do not
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allow
to
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make
a
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call
or talk over the phone. At this situation texting is the best solution. User can
easily
text
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message
to receive without making any noise or giving irritation to
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his or her
next
person.
Also
, texting is a short process to communicate others and cost effective. It is quite cheaper
rather
than
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make
a
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call
.
For example
, there are
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some
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application
like Facebook,
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Whatsapp
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allow
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people
to text
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messages
to another without any prone or problem of grammatical failure, and for this there is no extra charge required.
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, there is no intrusive face in texting. The recipient has
fully
right whenever he or she
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want
to reply messages.

Though, there are lots of advantages of texting,
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some
disadvantages. Teens these days are
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used
to texting more than
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make
a
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call
which is not useful to create a genuine bond such relationship with parents, friends or teachers. Within talking
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people
can be more frequent and understandable than texting. It is easy to share emotion through talking.

To conclude
, text
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message
has several advantages as compared to its drawback.
Also
, it is easier to basic information exchanges which is one of the main reasons why
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people
are
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used
to texting,
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but
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call
is
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good
for connection or actual conversation.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
12Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
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IELTS essay Many people today user their phone for sending text more than talking. What are the reason for this? Are there more advantage then disadvantage? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
271 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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