Highest-level executive jobs are commonly for men and not for women since the dawn of time. However, nowadays women can do what their counterparts do, so I certainly believe that the state should influence females and reserve these high-level jobs for them. This argument will be proven by looking at the women's educational attainment and confidence.
For one, the administration should make an advance level job reservation for modern women of today because they are highly educated, so they can do high-level works as men do. For instance, women in the Philippines value education so much, that is why they strive hard to finish their bachelor's degree and even pursue their Masters and PhD (Doctors of Philosophy) and sometimes they are more intelligent than Filipino men. In fact, according to Philippine newspaper inquirer report on the 10th of March this year, more and more women are the company CEO's (Chief Executive officers). So the Philippine government must encourage more Filipinas to do these executive works.
Highest-level executive jobs are
commonly
for
men
and not for
women
since the dawn of time.
However
, nowadays
women
can do what their counterparts do,
so
I
certainly
believe that the state should influence females and reserve these high-level jobs for them. This argument will
be proven
by looking at the women's educational attainment and confidence.
For one, the administration should
make
an advance level job reservation for modern
women
of
today
because
they are
highly
educated,
so
they can do high-level works as
men
do.
For instance
,
women
in the Philippines value education
so
much,
that is
why they strive
hard
to finish their bachelor's degree and even pursue their Masters and PhD (Doctors of Philosophy) and
sometimes
they are more intelligent than Filipino
men
. In fact, according to Philippine newspaper inquirer report on the 10th of March this year, more and more
women
are the
company
CEO's (Chief Executive officers).
So
the Philippine
government
must
encourage more
Filipinas
to do these executive works.
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