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Most of our information comes from the Internet nowadays Some people say that a large part of the information we get is incorrect Do you agree or disagree v.1

Most of our information comes from the Internet nowadays Some people say that a large part of the information we get is incorrect v. 1
Internet plays a indispensable role in everyone' s life because it provides a lot of information about the study subjects, business and news all over the world etcetra. It is considered by some individuals that the information on the internet is unreliable. I disagree with this notion. In my opinion, internet is widely accepted as a souce of immense of knowledge which makes the people more satisfied. Internet is preferred by vast majority of individuals because it is the one of the most trustworthy source. To begin with, to avail a easy and reliable information then internet is the best choice instead of other souces. For example, BBC news and the Reader' s Digest are popular news and megazines. It contains all precise information which is already proved by scientist and professionals. Moreover, people also aware about the different job vacancies which is issued by renowned companies and get a job opporunity if all requirements are fulfilled. One more thing is that the internet awares the society about different kinds of products as well hot issues all over the global area. Furthermore, various sites are on the internet which gather a right and beneficial information. For instance, if any individual want to take a information about astranomy then NASA website is useful and ac. uk websites are helpful in the case of getting admission in University in abroad. Last but not least, students do not need to struck on a particular reading materials. They can get a relevant information of particular subject by surfing the web. On the other hand, there are various types of information available on the internet and the people always confused to select the appropriate site because they are not sure about the data represent by sites. Another point is that some sites include a incorrect information for their personal benefit. Such as, a site which sell goods online to the consumers and one consumer who is interested in a specific product and after paying an amount by credit card, the purchaser not get anything. To sum up, although internet have some drawbacks but these problems can be solved by individuals to use it wisely and make more comparison with other sites.
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indispensable role in
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everyone&
#039; s life
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because
it provides
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a lot of
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information
about the study subjects, business and news all over the world
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etcetra
. It
is considered
by
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some
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individuals
that the
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information
on the internet is unreliable. I disagree with this notion. In my opinion, internet is
widely
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accepted
as a
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souce
of immense of knowledge which
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makes
the
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people
more satisfied.

Internet
is preferred
by vast majority of
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individuals
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because
it is the one of the most trustworthy source. To
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begin
with, to avail
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a
easy and reliable
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information
then internet is the best choice
instead
of other
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souces
.
For example
, BBC news and the
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Reader&
#039; s Digest are popular news and
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megazines
. It contains all precise
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information
which is already proved by scientist and professionals.
Moreover
,
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people
also
aware about the
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different
job vacancies which
is issued
by renowned
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companies
and
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get
a job
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opporunity
if all requirements
are fulfilled
. One more thing is that the internet
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awares
the society about
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different
kinds of products
as well
hot issues all over the global area.

Furthermore
, various
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sites
are on the internet which gather a right and beneficial
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information
.
For instance
, if any
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individual
want to take
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a
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information
about
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astranomy
then NASA website is useful and ac.
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uk
websites are helpful in the case of getting admission in University in abroad. Last
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but
not least, students do not need to struck on a particular reading materials. They can
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get
a relevant
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information
of particular subject by surfing the web.

On the other hand
, there are various types of
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information
available on the internet and the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
always confused to select the appropriate
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site
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
they are not sure about the data represent by
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sites
. Another point is that
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some
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sites
include a incorrect
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information
for their personal benefit. Such as, a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
site
which sell
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
goods
online to the consumers and one consumer who
is interested
in a specific product and after paying an amount by credit card, the purchaser not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
anything.

To sum up, although internet have
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some
drawbacks
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but
these problems can
be solved
by
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individuals
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
it
wisely
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
more comparison with other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sites
.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
19Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15Mistakes

IELTS essay Most of our information comes from the Internet nowadays Some people say that a large part of the information we get is incorrect v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
366 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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