The three diagrams above imply that music media develop continually. At a glance, we see some of music media were widely-used for a tiny period and became far less popular or diminished in the end such as Compact Disks, Vinyl Records and especially Cassettes.
In 1990, the Compact Disk was used by the majority, but the Digital Audio took its place in 2010. The war between these two media has broken out since 2000; when the Digital Audio appeared for the first time. Due to technology explosion, Cassette no longer being demanded by 2000. The Vinyl Record totally disappeared by 2000 and sprang up again in 2010.
To conclude, the Compact Disk popularity grew up by 40 percent and then fell off steeply by 60 percent. Also, there was an increase in Digital Audio use within 10 years. A sudden reappearance of Vinyl Record occurred after 20 years----between 1990 and 2010.
The three diagrams above imply that music media develop continually. At a glance, we see some of music media were widely-used for a tiny period and became far less popular or diminished in the end such as Compact Disks, Vinyl Records and especially Cassettes.
In 1990, the Compact Disk was used by the majority, but the Digital Audio took its place in 2010. The war between these two media has broken out since 2000; when the Digital Audio appeared for the first time. Due to technology explosion, Cassette no longer being demanded by 2000. The Vinyl Record totally disappeared by 2000 and sprang up again in 2010.
To conclude, the Compact Disk popularity grew up by 40 percent and then fell off steeply by 60 percent. Also, there was an increase in Digital Audio use within 10 years. A sudden reappearance of Vinyl Record occurred after 20 years----between 1990 and 2010
The three diagrams above imply that
music
media
develop
continually
. At a glance, we
see
some
of
music
media
were
widely
-
used
for a tiny period and became far less popular or diminished in the
end
such as
Compact
Disks
, Vinyl
Records
and
especially
Cassettes.
In 1990, the
Compact
Disk
was
used
by the majority,
but
the Digital Audio took its place in 2010. The war between these two
media
has broken out since 2000; when the Digital Audio appeared for the
first
time. Due to technology explosion, Cassette no longer
being demanded
by 2000. The Vinyl
Record
totally
disappeared by 2000 and sprang up again in 2010.
To conclude
, the
Compact
Disk
popularity grew up by 40
percent
and then fell off
steeply
by 60
percent
.
Also
, there was an increase in Digital Audio
use
within 10 years. A sudden reappearance of Vinyl
Record
occurred after 20 years----between 1990 and 2010.
The three diagrams above imply that
music
media
develop
continually
. At a glance, we
see
some
of
music
media
were
widely
-
used
for a tiny period and became far less popular or diminished in the
end
such as
Compact
Disks
, Vinyl
Records
and
especially
Cassettes.
In 1990, the
Compact
Disk
was
used
by the majority,
but
the Digital Audio took its place in 2010. The war between these two
media
has broken out since 2000; when the Digital Audio appeared for the
first
time. Due to technology explosion, Cassette no longer
being demanded
by 2000. The Vinyl
Record
totally
disappeared by 2000 and sprang up again in 2010.
To conclude
, the
Compact
Disk
popularity grew up by 40
percent
and then fell off
steeply
by 60
percent
.
Also
, there was an increase in Digital Audio
use
within 10 years. A sudden reappearance of Vinyl
Record
occurred after 20 years----between 1990 and 2010
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