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what are the positive effects of a transport system v.2

what are the positive effects of a transport system v. 2
Transportation is a system that helps move people, animals and goods from one place to the other. It could be via road, water, rail and air. The effectiveness and efficiency of a transport mechanism cannot be over emphasized as it has both positive and negative impacts on the economy of any nation. This essay will delve into the positive effects of a robust transportation network. Firstly, a good conveyance network could determine the ease of doing business in a particular location. Investors all over the world consider how easy it will be for businesses to thrive in an environment before investing in any country. One of the indices for measuring the ease of doing business is the available transport network. Business owners want to have reasonable assurance regarding the possibility of free flowing movement of its employees as well as goods and services, around the cities and across locations either via land, rail, coastal and air. In addition to the above, a reliable transport network helps to reduce the start up cost of a company. The availability of rail lines and good road networks, translate into the company channeling the available working capital into other things as the need to acquire staff buses will not arise. The multiplier effect of this is that the personnel cost of hiring a driver, fuel expense and maintenance overhead will be eliminated. Thus, these savings will be channelled into other acquiring other assets. Consequently, the company will make more profits and this will result in more tax for the government. Thirdly, the robustness of the transportation network involve putting alternative means of movement in place to avoid dependence on a single system. This implies that road, rail, water and air transport will be made available and affordable for the movement of people, services and goods. As a result, the stress of spending more time travelling on busy routes and frequency of sick leaves arising from the traffic menace will be reduced to the minimum. Also the wastage of man hours due to road congestion will be largely removed. In conclusion, a trustworthy transport mechanism do not only help improve the lives of individuals and corporations but in general, translates into increased foreign direct investment for the country. It also helps to provide more funds for the government in the form of revenues and taxation.
Transportation is a system that
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helps
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move
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people
, animals and
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goods
from one place to the
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other
. It could be via
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road
, water,
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rail
and air. The effectiveness and efficiency of a
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transport
mechanism cannot be over emphasized as it has both
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positive
and
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negative
impacts on the economy of any nation. This essay will delve into the
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positive
effects of a robust transportation network.

Firstly
, a
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good
conveyance
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network
could determine the
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ease
of doing
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business
in a particular location. Investors all over the world consider how easy it will be for
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businesses
to thrive in an environment
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before
investing in any country. One of the indices for measuring the
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ease
of doing
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business
is the available
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transport
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network
.
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Business
owners want to have reasonable assurance regarding the possibility of free flowing movement of its employees
as well
as
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goods
and services, around the cities and across locations either via land,
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rail
, coastal and air.

In addition
to the above, a reliable
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transport
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network
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helps
to
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reduce
the
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start
up cost of a
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company
. The availability of
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rail
lines and
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good
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road
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networks
, translate into the
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company
channeling the available working capital into
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other
things as the need to acquire staff buses will not arise. The multiplier effect of this is that the personnel cost of hiring a driver, fuel expense and maintenance overhead will
be eliminated
.
Thus
, these savings will
be channelled
into
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other
acquiring
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other
assets.
Consequently
, the
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company
will
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make
more profits and this will result in more tax for the
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government
.

Thirdly
, the robustness of the transportation
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network
involve putting alternative means of movement in place to avoid dependence on a single system.
This implies that
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road
,
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rail
, water and air
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transport
will
be made
available and affordable for the movement of
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people
, services and
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goods
.
As a result
, the
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stress
of spending more time travelling on busy routes and frequency of sick
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leaves
arising from the traffic menace will be
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reduced
to the minimum.
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the wastage of
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man hours
due to
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road
congestion will be
largely
removed.

In conclusion
, a trustworthy
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transport
mechanism do not
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only
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help
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improve
the
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lives
of individuals and corporations
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but
in general
, translates into increased foreign direct investment for the country. It
also
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helps
to provide more funds for the
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government
in the form of revenues and taxation.
13Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
35Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay what are the positive effects of a transport system v. 2

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
390 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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