It is perceived by most countries that by developing their economy, the living standard of their people could be improved, but there are those who believe that economic growth could result in loss of social values.
It is certainly true that countries with developed economies have improved their people's lives because of their advanced standard of public services such as health and education. Improved health care can improve the quality of life through treating diseases and increasing people's life expectancy. Also, increased educational standards can give the population a greater diversity of skills and literacy. This enables greater opportunity and freedom. In my knowledge, I have learned that education is seen as an important development of welfare and happiness.
However, while we can obviously see the benefits of a developed economy, there are other people who perceive that this could lead to losing of social values. It means that with higher economic growth, this may result in longer hours of work. Then working parents would not have enough quality time to spend with their children. Hence, children will tend to emulate their bad influence peers and eventually involve to an antisocial activity or juvenile delinquency, for instance, the unguided young teenagers, mainly African and Caribbean Americans in New York City in the 20th century.
In conclusion, I certainly believe that through developing national economy, it will give people a better quality of life. Although it could affect families negatively, this would be just a little impact compared to the many benefits it could give to its society in terms of health and educational services.
It
is perceived
by most countries that by developing their
economy
, the living standard of their
people
could be
improved
,
but
there are those who believe that economic growth could result in loss of social values.
It is
certainly
true that countries with developed
economies
have
improved
their
people
's
lives
because
of their advanced standard of public services such as health and education.
Improved
health care can
improve
the quality of life through treating diseases and increasing
people
's life expectancy.
Also
, increased educational standards can give the population a greater diversity of
skills
and literacy. This enables greater opportunity and freedom. In my knowledge, I have learned that education is
seen
as an
important
development of welfare and happiness.
However
, while we can
obviously
see
the benefits of a developed
economy
, there are other
people
who perceive that this could lead to losing of social values. It means that with higher economic growth, this may result in longer hours of work. Then working parents would not have
enough
quality time to spend with their children.
Hence
, children will tend to emulate their
bad
influence peers and
eventually
involve to an antisocial activity or juvenile delinquency,
for instance
, the unguided young
teenagers
,
mainly
African and Caribbean Americans in New York City in the 20th century.
In conclusion
, I
certainly
believe that through developing national
economy
, it will give
people
a better quality of life. Although it could affect families
negatively
, this would be
just
a
little
impact compared to the
many
benefits it could give to its society in terms of health and educational services.
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