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Most companies and organizations requires their employees to wear uniforms to work. what are the jobs that need uniform? what are the disadvantages of wearing uniforms to work? v.1

Most companies and organizations requires their employees to wear uniforms to work. what are the jobs that need uniform? what are the disadvantages of wearing uniforms to work? v. 1
It is a widely discussed debate whether or not uniforms are needed at workplaces, because not only are they plain, but they also make the job look uninteresting. Uniforms do have its fair share of pros and cons. There are many advantages and disadvantages of wearing uniforms at work. A uniform basically is a walking advertisement for the company. When stepping out in the world, or are working people usually take notice of your uniforms and through company logos and emblems. Wearing the same clothes would lead to a feeling of team spirit, and It also increases a feeling of loyalty and allegiance from the employees. Moreover, it builds a sense of trust and confidence to the customer when interacting with a uniformed individual. There are certain organizations that are focused on the customers such as hospitals, electronics showrooms, automobile showrooms etc. When wearing a uniform in such jobs, it gives a sense of solidarity and unity to the customer and the client feels more comfortable to call the employee for assistance. Also, it looks good for the company from a third-person objective. Poorly designed work clothes can result in restricted performance. This may cause difficulty for the employee since they find the uniform constricting their work output. For example, for flight stewardesses wearing pencil skirts and high heels may look good, but by the end of the day, it causes discomfort to the individuals. Wearing high heels for a long amount of time can cause muscular pain, painful soles and cramped legs. Hence, in an organization required to wear uniforms, try to consider the feelings of the employees too, since they’re the ones who have to wear them for the whole day. In conclusion, uniforms can serve as a form of identity for the company but at the same time, it can be a liability for the employees. When implementing a uniform dress code try to take a survey about how employees feel towards the idea of wearing a uniform.
It is a
widely
discussed debate
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whether or not
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uniforms
are needed
at workplaces,
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because
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only
are they plain,
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but
they
also
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make
the job look uninteresting.
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Uniforms
do have its
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fair
share of pros and cons. There are
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many
advantages and disadvantages of wearing
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uniforms
at work.

A
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uniform
basically
is a walking advertisement for the
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company
. When stepping out in the world, or are working
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people
usually
take notice of your
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uniforms
and through
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company
logos and emblems. Wearing the same clothes would lead to a feeling of team spirit, and It
also
increases a feeling of loyalty and allegiance from the
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employees
.
Moreover
, it builds a sense of trust and confidence to the customer when interacting with a uniformed individual. There are certain organizations that
are focused
on the customers such as hospitals, electronics showrooms, automobile showrooms etc.

When wearing a
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uniform
in such jobs, it gives a sense of solidarity and unity to the customer and the client feels more comfortable to call the
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employee
for assistance.
Also
, it looks
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good
for the
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company
from a third-person objective.

Poorly
designed work clothes can result in restricted performance. This may cause difficulty for the
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employee
since they find the
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uniform
constricting their work output.

For example
, for flight stewardesses wearing pencil skirts and high heels may look
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good
,
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but
by the
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end
of the day, it causes discomfort to the individuals. Wearing high heels for a long amount of time can cause muscular pain, painful soles and cramped legs.
Hence
, in an organization required to wear
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uniforms
, try to consider the feelings of the
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employees
too, since they’re the ones who
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have to
wear them for the whole day.

In conclusion
,
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uniforms
can serve as a form of identity for the
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company
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but
at the same time, it can be a liability for the
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employees
.
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When
implementing a
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uniform
dress code try to take a survey about how
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employees
feel towards the
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idea
of wearing a
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uniform
.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
21Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay Most companies and organizations requires their employees to wear uniforms to work. what are the jobs that need uniform? what are the disadvantages of wearing uniforms to work? v. 1

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
331 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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