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Many companies and organizations require their employees to wear uniform. What kind of jobs require uniforms? What are the disadvantages of wearing uniform to work? v.1

Many companies and organizations require their employees to wear uniform. What kind of jobs require uniforms? What are the disadvantages of wearing uniform to work? v. 1
Nowadays, corporates are working hard to improve the productivity of employees by experimenting a variety of strategies. Most of the big and small companies require their employees to wear uniform as a standard practice. The below essay will discuss why do some organizations require homogeneous and what are the drawbacks of wearing one at work. The main reason of wearing uniforms at workplace is to maintain discipline and equality in the workplace. Orderly gives a sense of identification that they belong to a specific organization. For example, it becomes easy to identify employees at a grocery mall, as they are wearing similar uniform. In addition, there are certain industries like Government offices, mill workers and army require to wear the same attire as this helps to correlate what industry they are working. On the other hand, most of the people would find boring to wear the same uniform each day. As all of us are humans and we like change. There are new trends of clothes that come up every month and every single human being prefers their own style of clothes. Moreover, people will loose creativity, if they were same clothes daily. As most of us spend 60percent of days time in office. In conclusion, There are some jobs that require uniform to maintain a nice working environment. But there are disadvantages associated with it too. It completely depends on the field that you are working in.
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companies
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require
their employees to wear
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uniform
as a standard practice. The below essay will discuss why do
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some
organizations
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require
homogeneous and what are the drawbacks of wearing one at work.

The main reason of wearing
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uniforms
at workplace is to maintain discipline and equality in the workplace.

Orderly gives a sense of identification that they belong to a specific organization.
For example
, it becomes easy to identify employees at a grocery mall, as they are wearing similar
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uniform
.
In addition
, there are certain industries like
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Government
offices, mill workers and army
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require
to wear the same attire as this
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helps
to correlate what industry they are working.

On the other hand
, most of the
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people
would find boring to wear the same
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uniform
each day. As all of us are humans and we like
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change
. There are new trends of clothes that
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come
up every month and every single human being prefers their
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own
style of clothes.
Moreover
,
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people
will
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loose
creativity, if they were same clothes daily.
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most of us spend 60percent of days time in office.

In conclusion
, There are
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some
jobs that
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require
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uniform
to maintain a nice working environment.
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But
there are disadvantages associated with it too. It completely depends on the field that you are working in.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
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IELTS essay Many companies and organizations require their employees to wear uniform. What kind of jobs require uniforms? What are the disadvantages of wearing uniform to work? v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
238 words
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6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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