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In the past, people spent their entire lives doing one job. But nowadays, they change their jobs frequently. Give reason and suggestion

In the past, most people spent their entire career working for one company, whereas people nowadays move from one job to another. What are the advantages and disadvantages of each? Which do you think is better? v. 3
These days, people tend to switch their jobs frequently compared to the previous generations. I will discuss some primary causes of this and offer some possible solutions to the problem. There are a number of reasons for changing jobs more often. The first reason is that some companies do not have a clear progression plan for their employees. As those enterprises do not clarify their salary and promotion policies to their workers, many people switch jobs frequently with the hope of getting a pay rise
These days,
people
tend to switch their jobs
frequently
compared to the previous generations. I will discuss
some
primary causes of this and offer
some
possible solutions to the problem.

There are a number of reasons for changing jobs more
often
. The
first
reason is that
some
companies
do not have a
clear
progression plan for their employees. As those enterprises do not clarify their salary and promotion policies to their workers,
many
people
switch jobs
frequently
with the hope of getting a pay
rise
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IELTS essay In the past, people spent their entire lives doing one job. But nowadays, they change their jobs frequently. Give reason and suggestion

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