We live in an age where mobile phones have significantly reduced the distance
between people. As the worlds progress the need and use of technology will be
increased as well. People have expressed their views pertaining to young children
having mobile. I have highlighted some points in response to this view.
Adolescence mind is an unprotected, which can be influenced by what they sense.
Though negative ideas may not influence them initially, it can influence them after
per-found exposure. These negative ideas can make them take up terrorism, resort
to violent actions, usage of drugs, viewing unwanted sites and much more. In order
to counteract this if parents could impart adequate knowledge and perception as to
the abhorrent nature of various fields, young adults can be safe and can also
influence their friends to do so. For Instance, my parents had shown how alcohol and
drug usage changes a person and reduces the life span which has kept me away
from them till now.
Despite warning from parents’ kids may tend to visit some sites. Mobile has a feature
where parents can track their kids through their phone. When young adults are
aware that parents can track what their mobile, they will defiantly refrain from visiting
such sites. Parents can block inappropriate sites also. This is a boon with countless
advantages. Example, a kid from my neighborhood went missing, police were able to
track the kid through the mobile location in their parents mobile. So, technology is a
boon for parents.
Mobile is a positive tool for parents to have control aver their children and guide
them when required as they have shared their knowledge and tracked their mobile
usage.
We
live
in an age where mobile phones have
significantly
reduced
the distance
between
people
. As the worlds progress the need and
use
of technology will
be
increased
as well
.
People
have expressed their views pertaining to young
children
having
mobile. I have highlighted
some
points in response to this view.
Adolescence mind is an unprotected, which can
be influenced
by what they sense.
Though
negative
ideas
may not influence them
initially
, it can influence them after
per-found
exposure. These
negative
ideas
can
make
them take up terrorism,
resort
to
violent actions, usage of drugs, viewing unwanted
sites
and much more. In
order
to counteract this if
parents
could impart adequate knowledge and perception as to
the abhorrent nature of various fields, young adults can be safe and can
also
influence
their friends to do
so
.
For Instance
, my
parents
had shown how alcohol
and
drug usage
changes
a person and
reduces
the life span which has
kept
me away
from
them till
now
.
Despite warning from
parents’
kids
may tend to visit
some
sites
. Mobile has a
feature
where
parents
can
track
their
kids
through their phone. When young adults
are
aware that
parents
can
track
what their mobile, they will
defiantly
refrain from visiting
such
sites
.
Parents
can block inappropriate
sites
also
. This is a boon with
countless
advantages
. Example, a
kid
from my neighborhood went missing, police were able to
track
the
kid
through the mobile location in their
parents
mobile.
So
, technology is a
boon
for parents.
Mobile is a
positive
tool for
parents
to have control aver their children and guide
them
when required as they have shared their knowledge and
tracked
their mobile
usage
.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
16Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
22Mistakes