Because most information about culture and history can be found on the internet today musems are not necessary To what extent do you agree or disagree v.1
Because most information about culture and history can be found on the internet today musems are not necessary v. 1
Some people think that the majority of data on culture and history of different civilizations might be found though Google site. Therefore, they believe that people may refuse to have museums. I completely disagree with this point of view, and I think that museums must remain as part of people' s life. Moreover, they complete humans' knowledge, which they get through the global network.
First of all, museums are historical and cultural heritage. They keep knowledge of all existed civilizations and preserve artifacts. For instance, when man attends a museum, he may feel himself in that period of time. Any picture from the internet, could not give these emotions and feelings. It also helps to understand the current situation that is occurring now, because history is always repeated. That is why, I think that museums are necessary.
Secondly, museums encourage children to study and know more. For example, Natural History Museum, which is situated in London, The United Kingdom, has various sections that reveal the history of life. Men can see human' s evolution, dinosaurs, space section and so on. Furthermore, all these exhibition sites motivate students to know more about science and history and comprehend mechanisms of the life cycle. All these facts prove the necessity of museums.
To conclude, even if some people think that museums are not necessary, because of the development of the internet, that is not so. Museums are historic and cultural heritage, the instrument of education. I think that museums will exist even if they change their shape.
Some
people
think
that the majority of data on culture and
history
of
different
civilizations might
be found
though Google site.
Therefore
, they believe that
people
may refuse to have
museums
. I completely disagree with this point of view, and I
think
that
museums
must
remain as part of
people&
#039; s life.
Moreover
, they complete
humans&
#039; knowledge, which they
get
through the global network.
First of all
,
museums
are historical and cultural heritage. They
keep
knowledge of all existed civilizations and preserve artifacts.
For instance
, when
man
attends a
museum
, he may feel himself in that period of time. Any picture from the internet, could not give these emotions and feelings. It
also
helps
to understand the
current
situation
that is
occurring
now
,
because
history
is always repeated.
That is
why, I
think
that
museums
are necessary.
Secondly
,
museums
encourage children to study and know more.
For example
, Natural
History
Museum
, which
is situated
in London, The United Kingdom, has various sections that reveal the
history
of life.
Men
can
see
human&
#039; s evolution, dinosaurs, space section and
so
on.
Furthermore
, all these exhibition sites motivate students to know more about science and
history
and comprehend mechanisms of the life cycle. All these facts prove the necessity of museums.
To conclude
, even if
some
people
think
that
museums
are not necessary,
because
of the development of the internet,
that is
not
so
.
Museums
are historic and cultural heritage, the instrument of education. I
think
that
museums
will exist even if they
change
their shape.
14Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
24Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes