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Nowadays it is not only large studios that are able to make films Digital filmmaking now enables anyone to make films Do you think this is a positive or negative development v.2

Nowadays it is not only large studios that are able to make films Digital filmmaking now enables anyone to make films Do you think this is a positive or negative development v. 2
Currently, huge and small studios are able to shot movies. Developing digital filmmaking allows shooting movies to every person. This essay will reveal the advantages and disadvantages of digital filmmaking, however, I think that the pros outweigh drawbacks. On the one hand, the development of digital filmmaking has its beneficial sites. First of all, digitization will decrease costs and people could shot movies with a limited budget. Cinema makers need to purchase for design, because they may draw it. The economy will affect on everything. Furthermore, film producers may pay more to actors and other supporting staff. Finally, people with amazing and unusual plots could produce their films. It is known that Oscar and Cannes festival winners are mostly authors or small studio' s movies. More talented persons will be discovered. Therefore, Filmmaking will develop as an art. On the other hand, the quality of movies will fall down, because many amateurs will start to shot movies, which will reflect on the excellence of the cinema. Initially, digital cinema requires good computer skills to edit films. Secondly, digital cameras lose details in whites and blacks. Finally, it is difficult to get high quality in low light conditions. As a result, if people go to the cinema and watch the “garbage” film, they will be disappointed and will not go there again. The effect of the soap opera will remain in humans’ memories. It means that cinematography will lose their customers and money. To conclude, digital films have changed the industry, so developing digitization in filmmaking enables any person to shot movies. Moreover, small studios are able to produce a cinema. I think that it is a positive trend because people with a tiny budget could make movies. Also, the world could open new talents.
Currently
, huge and
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small
studios are able to
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shot
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
movies
. Developing digital filmmaking
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allows
shooting
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movies
to every person. This essay will reveal the advantages and disadvantages of digital filmmaking,
however
, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
that the pros outweigh drawbacks.

On the one hand, the development of digital filmmaking has its beneficial sites.
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, digitization will decrease costs and
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people
could
The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: "shoot"
shot
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movies
with a limited budget.
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Cinema
makers need to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
for design,
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because
they may draw it. The economy will
Did you mean "effect"?
affect
on everything.
Furthermore
, film producers may pay more to actors and other supporting staff.
Finally
,
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people
with amazing and unusual plots could produce their films. It
is known
that Oscar and Cannes festival winners are
mostly
authors or
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
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studio&
#039; s
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movies
. More talented persons will
be discovered
.
Therefore
, Filmmaking will develop as an art.

On the other hand
, the quality of
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movies
will fall down,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
amateurs will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shot
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
movies
, which will reflect on the excellence of the
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cinema
.
Initially
, digital
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cinema
requires
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
computer
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
to edit films.
Secondly
, digital cameras lose
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
in whites and blacks.
Finally
, it is difficult to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
high quality in low light conditions.
As a result
, if
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people
go to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cinema
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watch
the “garbage” film, they will
be disappointed
and will not go there again. The effect of the soap opera will remain in humans’ memories. It means that cinematography will lose their customers and money.

To conclude
, digital films have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
the industry,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
developing digitization in filmmaking enables any person to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shot
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
movies
.
Moreover
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
studios are able to produce a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cinema
. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
that it is a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
trend
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
with a tiny budget could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
movies
.
Also
, the world could open new talents.
15Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
21Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS essay Nowadays it is not only large studios that are able to make films Digital filmmaking now enables anyone to make films Do you think this is a positive or negative development v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
294 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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