Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

More and more people think that there is no need for printed paper newspapers. To what extend do you agree or disagree. v.1

More and more people think that there is no need for printed paper newspapers. v. 1
Many People think that there is no use of Printed newspapers. Where as some others feel that it's important to have Printed newspapers along with the online newspapers. In this essay we will discuss deep into both versions. Since the 18th Century newspapers play a vital role in communicating news to the people across the globe irrespective of the geography, language or economic condition. Also, newspapers help to know better about the society, the changes happening around the world and providing so much information About the education, politics and health. One cannot imagine a world without a newspaper. Just like Visual media, printing, media plays a crucial role in the society. But because of the technological advancements people prefer to read news in the online instead of reading newspapers. This is a change in the recent years because of the advancement of online platforms like Facebook, Whatsapp and twitter. Coming to online media even though their viewership have been increased in the recent past, it's very difficult to know which news is genuine and which news is fake. Also, there are no strong restrictions on the social media which causes them to use in a bad manner. In spite of their reduced viewership Print media provides many jobs for the individuals who are supporting their families. My conclusion is we need to improve the reading of printed newspapers as they provide more legitimate information than online media and also spreading false news is less in newspapers. At the same time we will adopt the new features in the social media. There should be a balance between the Printed media and online media.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
People
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
that there is no
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Printed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
newspapers
.
Did you mean "Whereas"?
Where as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
others feel that it's
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
to have
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Printed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
newspapers
along with the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
newspapers
. In this essay we will discuss deep into both versions.

Since the 18th Century
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
newspapers
play a vital role in communicating
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
to the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
across the globe irrespective of the geography, language or economic condition.
Also
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
newspapers
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
to know better about the society, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
happening around the world and providing
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
much information

About the education, politics and health. One cannot imagine a world without a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
newspaper
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Just
like Visual
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
media
, printing,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
media
plays a crucial role in the society.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of the technological advancements
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
prefer to read
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
instead
of reading
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
newspapers
. This is a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
in the recent years
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of the advancement of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
platforms like Facebook,
Possible spelling mistake found.
Whatsapp
and twitter. Coming to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
media
even though
their viewership have
been increased
in the recent past, it's
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
difficult to know which
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
is genuine and which
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
is fake.
Also
, there are no strong restrictions on the social
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
media
which causes them to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
in a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
manner.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
In spite of
their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduced
viewership Print
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
media
provides
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
jobs for the individuals who are supporting their families.

My conclusion is we need to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
the reading of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
printed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
newspapers
as they provide more legitimate information than
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
media
and
also
spreading false
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
is less in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
newspapers
. At the same time we will adopt the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
features in the social
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
media
. There should be a balance between the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Printed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
media
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
media
.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
34Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay More and more people think that there is no need for printed paper newspapers. v. 1

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
272 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Similar posts


Recent posts