Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

More and more people nowadays are buying fashionable clothes. Does it have a more negative or positive effects? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your experience. v.1

More and more people nowadays are buying fashionable clothes. Does it have a more negative or positive effects? v. 1
The trend of purchasing items with a well-known label is a major topic of concern in today's society. This happens because people often associate a famous brand with quality, and sometimes because most of their peers are using the same products. As far as this is concerned, the positive aspects are more significant than the negative ones. Popular brand names often attract a great number of customers. This is primarily because products with major brands are often of great quality and reliability. In today's world, negative feedback can be spread so fast that these brands have to try their best not incur any criticism which can ruin their reputation. In addition to this, some people purchase items with a well-known name because they want to be a member of the society of people using that product. Apple, for example, has successfully built a community of hundreds of millions of users of the iOS operating system. The consequence of this is that new smartphone users are likely to choose an Apple one so that they have access to the aforementioned community, which means they can communicate and interact with other Apple product users effectively. Overall, this trend brings more benefits than drawbacks to society. The only disadvantage that is worth mentioning is that companies that own famous brands may become monopolistic, which may be disadvantageous for consumers in the long term because these companies may lose the motivation to improve themselves. Laws and governmental policies, however, are now readily available to prevent any company from reaching the state of monopoly, so this disadvantage may be out of the question. This trend is of greater benefit, in a sense that buyers of a product with a well-known name are assured of product quality. These people, as a result, are less likely to worry about the chance of buying a low-quality item. When they buy more products with popular brand names, they may eventually attain the state of having all of their possessions up to a modern perception of what is a good product. In conclusion, the two most prominent reasons as to why people purchase products from famous companies are product quality assurance and the desire to be a part of a community owning and using the same range of items. This development is positive to society at large, despite the only drawback being the chance it may turn a company into a monopolistic one. I predict that this trend will continue into the future, and consumers may thrive in a society where the quality of every single product is standardized, which is guaranteed by its brand name.
The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trend
of purchasing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
items
with a well-known label is a major topic of concern in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
's
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
society
. This happens
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
often
associate a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
famous
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
brand
with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
quality
, and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sometimes
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
most of their peers are using the same
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
. As far as this
is concerned
, the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
aspects are more significant than the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
negative
ones.

Popular
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
brand
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
names
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
often
attract a great number of customers. This is
primarily
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
with major
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
brands
are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
often
of great
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
quality
and reliability. In
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
's world,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
negative
feedback can
be spread
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
fast
that these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
brands
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
try their best not incur any criticism which can ruin their reputation.
In addition
to this,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
items
with a well-known
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
name
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
they want to be a member of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
society
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
using that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
product
. Apple,
for example
, has
successfully
built a community of hundreds of millions of users of the iOS operating system. The consequence of this is that new smartphone users are likely to choose an Apple one
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that they have access to the aforementioned community, which means they can communicate and interact with other Apple
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
product
users
effectively
.

Overall
, this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trend
brings more benefits than drawbacks to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
society
. The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
disadvantage
that is
worth mentioning is that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
companies
that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
famous
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
brands
may become monopolistic, which may be disadvantageous for consumers in the long term
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
companies
may lose the motivation to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
themselves. Laws and governmental policies,
however
, are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
readily
available to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
prevent
any
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company
from reaching the state of monopoly,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
this disadvantage may be out of the question. This
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trend
is of greater benefit, in a sense that buyers of a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
product
with a well-known
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
name
are assured
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
product
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
quality
. These
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
,
as a result
, are less likely to worry about the chance of buying a low-quality
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
item
. When they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
more
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
with popular
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
brand
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
names
, they may
eventually
attain the state of having all of their possessions up to a modern perception of what is a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
product.

In conclusion
, the two most prominent reasons as to why
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
from
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
famous
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
companies
are
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
product
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
quality
assurance and the desire to be a part of a community owning and using the same range of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
items
. This development is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
society
at large, despite the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
drawback being the chance it may turn a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company
into a monopolistic one. I predict that this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trend
will continue into the future, and consumers may thrive in a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
society
where the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
quality
of every single
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
product
is standardized
, which
is guaranteed
by its
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
brand
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
name
.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
50Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS essay More and more people nowadays are buying fashionable clothes. Does it have a more negative or positive effects? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
436 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Similar posts


Recent posts