Crime rates in cities are on the rise in the recent years, the major proportion of these are being done by the youth. The underlying cause of this is the widespread availability of weapons and the increased abuse of alcohol and drugs among younger individuals. We can curb such events by providing proper educational and counselling services to children and moderating the use of substances which provoke criminal behaviour.
One of the problems is the lack of values. Education forms the foundation of an individual's core beliefs and values. If you educate a child, you educate an entire nation. They must be imparted proper cultural values and methods to tackle stressful situations. For example, If a child is taught about how to deal with anger, he will take it as a learning lesson and move forwards rather than holding a grudge. Due to newer technological advances, minors have gained easy access to drugs and alcohol. This will lead to dependance and behavioural abnormalities. Furthermore, this may lead to the impaired ability of an individual to judge the consequences of such an action.
The solution to this problem will be upgrading the schooling system. In the developed countries, educational facilities are advanced and help in tackling issues like juvenile delinquency and substance abuse. For example, if a juvenile is caught drinking alcohol, he is properly counselled to prevent him from committing further crimes. Such systems should be implemented all over the world to bring about peace. Nevertheless, The government should also actively participate in the control of youth crimes by enacting certain laws which ban the sale of harmful substances to minors and limit the sales of drugs for medicinal purposes only.
To conclude, The increased proportion of crime in the cities is attributed to young adults in recent years. This is due to poor schooling systems and common usage of harmful substances. However, This problem could be tackled by educating at the school level and legislating certain laws by the government.
Crime
rates in cities are on the rise in the recent years, the major proportion of these are
being done
by the youth. The underlying cause of this is the widespread availability of weapons and the increased abuse of alcohol and drugs among younger individuals. We can curb such
events
by providing proper educational and counselling services to children and moderating the
use
of
substances
which provoke criminal
behaviour
.
One of the problems is the lack of values. Education forms the foundation of an individual's core beliefs and values. If you educate a child, you educate an entire nation. They
must
be imparted
proper cultural values and methods to tackle stressful situations.
For example
, If a child
is taught
about how to deal with anger, he will take it as a learning lesson and
move
forwards
rather
than holding a grudge. Due to newer technological advances, minors have gained easy access to drugs and alcohol. This will lead to
dependance
and
behavioural
abnormalities.
Furthermore
, this may lead to the impaired ability of an individual to judge the consequences of such an action.
The solution to this problem will be upgrading the schooling system. In the
developed countries
, educational facilities
are advanced
and
help
in tackling issues like juvenile delinquency and
substance
abuse.
For example
, if a juvenile
is caught
drinking alcohol, he is
properly
counselled to
prevent
him from committing
further
crimes
. Such systems should
be implemented
all over the world to bring about peace.
Nevertheless
, The
government
should
also
actively
participate in the control of youth
crimes
by enacting certain laws which ban the sale of harmful
substances
to minors and limit the sales of drugs for medicinal purposes
only
.
To conclude
, The increased proportion of
crime
in the cities
is attributed
to young adults in recent years. This is due to poor schooling systems and common usage of harmful
substances
.
However
, This problem could
be tackled
by educating at the school level and legislating certain laws by the
government
.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes