Nowadays, people are adapting to the different food styles rapidly, some of them are good for health and others are bad. Among the bad, fast foods are a major concern because of which the average weight of the people is increasing dramatically. Some individuals argue that the only solution for this problem is to increase the prices of these foods. I do not agree with the statement.
There are numerous studies which are showing that the weight of the people is increasing due to the changing food priorities. This public health epidemic needs to be addressed at the earliest, the first step that needs to be considered is, rising an awareness among the public about the side effects of the street food or the high calorie foods like the burgers and the pizzas. Second step is to encourage the public to take part in regular cardiovascular exercises. Just by increasing the prices of the high fatty foods will not solve the problem, it has to be the combination of multiple other methods.
Multinational food corporations have a major role in this public health hazard, authorities should implement strict laws to bring the accountability. For example, In India food chains like KFC and pizza hut doesn’t show the calorie count on the menu because of which, some individuals might consider eating them eating all the time. If the calorie and nutrient index is displayed, it will create an awareness among the general public.
To conclude, sticking to one method will not yield the desired results. The combination government regulations and the public awareness will help solving the problem for good.
Nowadays,
people
are adapting to the
different
food
styles
rapidly
,
some
of them are
good
for health
and others
are
bad
. Among the
bad
,
fast
foods
are a major concern
because
of which the average weight of the
people
is increasing
dramatically
.
Some
individuals argue that the
only
solution for this problem is to increase the prices of these
foods
. I do not
agree
with the statement.
There are numerous studies which are showing that the weight of the
people
is increasing due to the changing
food
priorities. This
public
health epidemic needs to
be addressed
at the earliest, the
first
step that needs to
be considered
is, rising an awareness among the
public
about the side effects of the street
food
or the high calorie
foods
like the burgers and the pizzas. Second step is to encourage the
public
to
take part
in regular cardiovascular exercises.
Just
by increasing the prices of the high fatty
foods
will not solve the problem, it
has to
be the combination of multiple other methods.
Multinational
food
corporations have a major role in this
public
health hazard, authorities should implement strict laws to bring the accountability.
For example
, In India
food
chains like KFC and
pizza hut
doesn’t
show
the calorie count on the menu
because
of which,
some
individuals might consider eating them eating all the time. If the calorie and nutrient index
is displayed
, it will create an awareness among the
general public
.
To conclude
, sticking to one method will not yield the desired results. The combination
government
regulations and the
public
awareness will
help
solving
the problem for
good
.
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