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More and more newspapers and news channels are using photographs to support their news articles and stories. Some people think that photographs are not a reliable source of news while others consider photographs to be irrefutable. Discuss both sides and give your opinion v.2

More and more newspapers and news channels are using photographs to support their news articles and stories. Some people think that photographs are not a reliable source of news while others consider photographs to be irrefutable. 2
Although it is thought that pictures on the paper press or on television are indispensable, other people are doubtful of its reliability. In my opinion, it is true that photographs are unquestionable a trustworthy method to illustrate the news. On the one hand, images are not considered reliable news resources and I agree. There are some several reasons behind this idea. The first thing is one image cannot explain the whole true story. In order words, the writer can manipulate the truth by simply taking a somewhat relevant picture at intentionally attach it to the news. For example, a picture of a homeless child is not informative enough to conclude that he/she is the victim of domestic abuse. Another reason is that we cannot derive the exact moment when the pictures are taken. In order to attract more audience to his news, a local tour reporter has used the picture of last year event to illustrate for the recent one. Thus, it leads to serious misconception about a particular matter. Besides, when taking the privacy of individuals into account, to accidentally appear in a random photo could endanger their personal life. On the other hand, photographs are a crucial source of news, according to some. One reason depicts from the demonstration of image. For some articles for children, pictures are widely used so that young audiences can easily enjoy it In conclusion, while imaging is seen as vital method to be the source of information, I would argue that it is not a reliable foundation in terms of authenticity and clarity
Although it is
thought
that
pictures
on the paper press or on television are indispensable, other
people
are doubtful of its reliability. In my opinion, it is true that photographs are unquestionable a trustworthy method to illustrate the news.

On the one hand, images are not considered reliable
news
resources and I
agree
. There are
some
several reasons behind this
idea
. The
first
thing is one image cannot
explain
the whole true story. In order words, the writer can manipulate the truth by
simply
taking a somewhat relevant
picture
at
intentionally
attach it to the
news
.
For example
, a
picture
of a homeless child is not informative
enough
to conclude
that he/she is the victim of domestic abuse. Another reason is that we cannot derive the exact moment when the
pictures
are taken
. In order to attract more audience to his
news
, a local tour reporter has
used
the
picture
of last year
event
to illustrate for the recent one.
Thus
, it leads to serious misconception about a particular matter.
Besides
, when taking the privacy of individuals into account, to
accidentally
appear in a random photo could endanger their personal life.

On the other hand
, photographs are a crucial source of
news
, according to
some
. One reason depicts from the demonstration of image. For
some
articles for children,
pictures
are
widely
used
so
that young audiences can
easily
enjoy
it


In conclusion
, while imaging is
seen
as vital method to be the source of information, I would argue that it is not a reliable foundation in terms of authenticity and clarity
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
10Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay More and more newspapers and news channels are using photographs to support their news articles and stories. Some people think that photographs are not a reliable source of news while others consider photographs to be irrefutable. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
260 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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