Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

More and more newspapers and news channels are using photographs to support their news articles and stories. Some people think that photographs are not a reliable source of news while others consider photographs to be irrefutable. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. v.6

More and more newspapers and news channels are using photographs to support their news articles and stories. Some people think that photographs are not a reliable source of news while others consider photographs to be irrefutable. v. 6
Photographs have become the main part of every Television Channel and daily news bugle, companies tend to invest enormously in these departments to make it to the best use. In my opinion, I think that even though it is not the most trusted parts of the news, we could never be able to erase them from our daily sources. To begin with, some people depict that the images are not reliable due to their inconsistency in reflecting what has really happened. This is because, pictures are only a frame of that time period, which depicts only the objects that are present and their behaviour. None of their motives are clearly represented. For example, take the case of two persons shaking hands with each other, the frame could posses they are being friendly, at the same time, they might be spreading the Corona Virus. So, fundamentally the do not portray the actual things that are happening. On the Contrary, some people think they are irrefutable as they are easy to understand. This because, images do not have language boundaries, a person from a different background can easily understand it, they do not have the need to understand the local text. In the case of kids too, they are able to learn faster from pictures rather than textual scripts. That is the main reason, why comic books are favourite for them, as they could easily be able to induce the information from them without any difficulty. In conclusion, photographs are not to be taken seriously for evident purpose, and at the same time we cannot remove them completely, as they are the easiest way of transferring knowledge to the readers.
Photographs have become the main part of every Television Channel and daily news bugle,
companies
tend to invest
enormously
in these departments to
make
it to the best
use
. In my opinion, I
think
that
even though
it is not the most trusted parts of the news, we could never be able to erase them from our daily sources.

To
begin
with,
some
people
depict that the images are not reliable due to their inconsistency in reflecting what has
really
happened. This is
because
, pictures are
only
a frame of that time period, which depicts
only
the objects that are present and their
behaviour
. None of their motives are
clearly
represented.
For example
, take the case of two persons shaking hands with each other, the frame could posses they are being friendly, at the same time, they might be spreading the
Corona Virus
.
So
,
fundamentally
the do
not portray the actual things that are happening.

On the Contrary
,
some
people
think
they are irrefutable as they are easy to understand. This
because
, images do not have language boundaries, a person from a
different
background can
easily
understand it, they do not have the need to understand the local text. In the case of kids too, they are able to learn faster from pictures
rather
than textual scripts.
That is
the main reason, why comic books are
favourite
for them, as they could
easily
be able to induce the information from them without any difficulty.

In conclusion
, photographs are not to
be taken
seriously
for evident purpose, and at the same time we cannot remove them completely, as they are the easiest way of transferring knowledge to the readers.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes
With languages, you are at home anywhere.
Edward De Waal

IELTS essay More and more newspapers and news channels are using photographs to support their news articles and stories. Some people think that photographs are not a reliable source of news while others consider photographs to be irrefutable. v. 6

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
278 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Similar posts