In contemporary society, there are increasing husbands in their families choose to stay in to look after their children instead of going out to work. Many people insist on the view that this will help them build up a healthier families than dual-career families. As far as I am concerned, I tend to agree with this statement as the reasons below.
On the one hand, in the gender-blind society, it is no longer necessary for men to assume the responsibility to pay for their families' living expense and their wives take care of the children at home. Conversely, it is not uncommon to see that many families are the other way round, because men also have equal capacity as women to handle the household matters. Indeed, this is not prevalent in some countries of different culture and religions, but it seems an unavoidable change in today's world.
On the other hand, it is undeniable that children need supervision from their parents after school. It can be seen that many children are fond of spending most of their spare time on playing video games and walking on the street with peers because both of their parents are absent from home. As a result, they will be easily influenced by inappropriate information from computers or socially acceptable activities such as violence and drinking. Therefore, single-working families are able to deliver more proper supervision to their children than both-working families in terms of parenting.
In conclusion, as the promotion of sexual equality, the phenomenon of house-husband is understandable, and this will creates benefit to the families because their children will be guided and controlled when they leave school.
In contemporary society, there are increasing husbands in their
families
choose to stay in to look after their
children
instead
of going out to work.
Many
people
insist on the view that this will
help
them build up a healthier
families
than dual-career
families
. As far as I
am concerned
, I tend to
agree
with this statement as the reasons below.
On the one hand, in the gender-blind society, it is no longer necessary for
men
to assume the responsibility to pay for their families' living expense and their wives take care of the
children
at home.
Conversely
, it is not uncommon to
see
that
many
families
are the other way round,
because
men
also
have equal capacity as women to handle the household matters.
Indeed
, this is not prevalent in
some
countries of
different
culture and religions,
but
it seems an unavoidable
change
in
today
's world.
On the other hand
, it is undeniable that
children
need supervision from their parents after school. It can be
seen
that
many
children
are fond of spending most of their spare time on playing video games and walking on the street with peers
because
both of their parents are absent from home.
As a result
, they will be
easily
influenced by inappropriate information from computers or
socially
acceptable activities such as violence and drinking.
Therefore
, single-working
families
are able to deliver more proper supervision to their
children
than both-working
families
in terms of parenting.
In conclusion
, as the promotion of sexual equality, the phenomenon of
house
-husband is understandable, and this will creates benefit to the
families
because
their
children
will
be guided
and controlled when they
leave
school.
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