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Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? v.10

Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters. with this statement? v. 10
What is the significance of spending a huge amount of money for space research? Even though many argue that this is for the benefits of the human, others think that this can be better used for more pressing issues. In my opinion, I strongly support the latter’s view because this research has revolutionised various other fields that are extremely significant for the mankind. On the one hand, those who believe that governments fund can be channelized to resolve issues related to health, education and infrastructure. By financing these areas, would uplift the status of the common people in the country. Eventually, they, taxpayers, feel that their money better utilized. Additionally, most of the outer space programs are launched to get either military dominance or spy on each other, this can be unethical use of public fund, according to some. Finally, it is commonly pointed out that, only a fraction of money squandering for space excavations, required to provide necessary facilities for the society. On the other hand, despite the above mentioned argument, several people believe that, the space excavation brings many advantages to the human, and I support this concept. As the mankind like adventures and explorations, additionally, always has the tendency to upgrade something which was discoverd by the older generations. These studies have helped the advancement of many other fields: communication, health, and defence; for instance, medical imaging techniques, which we use today were originally developed for the outer space study. In other words, these advanced technologies first used to analysis images of the moon which were captured by satellites. Therefore, under no circumstances not any individual can neglect the contributions of the space research for human beings. By way of conclusion, while people are deferred on funding a whooping amount investment for space related excavations, I again reaffirm that this definitely brought many positives to the mankind in a large scale.
What is the significance of spending a huge amount of money for
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space
research?
Even though
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many
argue that this is for the benefits of the human, others
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think
that this can be better
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used
for more pressing issues. In my opinion, I
strongly
support the latter’s view
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because
this research has
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revolutionised
various
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other
fields that are
extremely
significant for the mankind.

On the one hand, those who believe that
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governments
fund can
be channelized
to resolve issues related to health, education and infrastructure. By financing these areas, would uplift the status of the common
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people
in the country.
Eventually
, they, taxpayers, feel that their money better utilized.
Additionally
, most of the outer
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space
programs
are launched
to
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get
either military dominance or spy on each
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other
, this can be unethical
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use
of public fund, according to
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some
.
Finally
, it is
commonly
pointed out that,
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only
a fraction of money squandering for
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space
excavations, required to provide necessary facilities for the society.

On the
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other
hand, despite the above mentioned argument, several
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people
believe that, the
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space
excavation brings
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many
advantages to the human, and I support this concept. As the mankind like adventures and explorations,
additionally
, always has the tendency to upgrade something which was
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discoverd
by the older generations. These studies have
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helped
the advancement of
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many
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other
fields: communication, health, and
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defence
;
for instance
, medical imaging techniques, which we
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use
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today
were
originally
developed for the outer
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space
study. In
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other
words, these advanced technologies
first
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used
to analysis images of the moon which
were captured
by satellites.
Therefore
, under no circumstances not any individual can neglect the contributions of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
space
research for human beings.

By way of conclusion, while
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
are deferred
on funding a whooping amount investment for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
space
related excavations, I again reaffirm that this definitely brought
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
positives to the mankind in a large scale.
13Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
12Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
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IELTS essay Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters. with this statement? v. 10

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
314 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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