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Modern communications mean that it's no longer necessary to write letters. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words. v.14

Modern communications mean that it's no longer necessary to write letters. with this statement? v. 14
In this modern era, sharing information between the people would reach easily and quickly. Some folks believe that this expected speed of communication can be done with the help of modern technology application via through electronic mail, social media sites. Others believe that because of these activities, the letter-writing will not have the influence to decline. I largely agree that the latter viewpoint is true. Firstly, from the ancient period to now, without information sharing, nothing can be communicated. Only the method of transferring the ideas have changed. The letter writing was one of the modes of communication and lasting until now with the same efficient and efficiency. Even though the conveying method has upgraded with modern technology, the letter-writing has not vanished. For example, many government-aided companies sharing the information to the public or private institution through the courier by post. In addition, there was news from the Indian government that this year they have allocated a huge amount from the financial budget to the postal department. Till now, the essential information is sent through the letter from higher authorities, and many rural areas depend on post. Secondly, writing a letter is treated as a trustworthy, and can be used as a written record in the future. This is due to that the messages conveying through modern applications can be hacked by criminals or by terrorists, where the information can easily be stolen. For instance, military communication by any country will not take place through any social media, the only mode of transferring ideas through a letter. Moreover, only in letter communication, the information what the speaker send will be received directly to the receiver by post. So, this process has a fulfilment to both sender and a receiver that the information received securely. To conclude, though modern applications have easy access, the letter-writing has unique features. The way like delivering the message securely to the receiver, used as evidence in the future. So, any technology development cannot destroy the presence of letter writing.
In this
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modern
era, sharing
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information
between the
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people
would reach
easily
and
quickly
.
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Some
folks believe that this
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expected
speed of
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communication
can
be done
with the
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help
of
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modern
technology application via
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through
electronic mail, social media sites. Others believe that
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because
of these activities, the letter-writing will not have the influence to decline. I
largely
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agree
that the latter viewpoint is true.

Firstly
, from the ancient period to
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now
, without
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information
sharing, nothing can
be communicated
.
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Only
the method of transferring the
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ideas
have
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changed
. The
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letter
writing was one of the modes of
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communication
and lasting until
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now
with the same efficient and efficiency.
Even though
the conveying method has upgraded with
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modern
technology, the letter-writing has not vanished.
For example
,
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many
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government
-aided
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companies
sharing the
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information
to the public or private institution
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through
the courier by post.
In addition
, there was news from the Indian
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government
that this year they have allocated a huge amount from the financial budget to the postal department. Till
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now
, the essential
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information
is
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sent
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through
the
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letter
from higher authorities, and
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many
rural areas depend on post.

Secondly
, writing a
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letter
is treated
as a trustworthy, and can be
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used
as a written record in the future. This is due to that the messages conveying
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through
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modern
applications can
be hacked
by criminals or by terrorists, where the
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information
can
easily
be stolen
.
For instance
, military
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communication
by any country will not take place
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through
any social media, the
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only
mode of transferring
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ideas
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through
a
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letter
.
Moreover
,
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only
in
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letter
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communication
, the
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information
what the speaker
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send
will
be received
directly
to the receiver by post.
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So
, this process has a
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fulfilment
to both sender and a receiver that the
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information
received
securely
.

To conclude
, though
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modern
applications have easy access, the letter-writing has unique features. The way like delivering the message
securely
to the receiver,
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used
as evidence in the future.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, any technology development cannot
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destroy
the presence of
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letter
writing.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Modern communications mean that it's no longer necessary to write letters. with this statement? v. 14

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
335 words
8.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
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