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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your v.66

Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters. with this statement? 66
The 21st century is the era in which technology is enhancing rapidly. The need to write letters has been reduced to a minimum however now new methods of communication are preferred, Email, Fax, etc. Still, there are people out there who are keeping this tradition alive. In this fast pace of time, we need quick methods of getting things done. The letter is considered as a slow means of communication however this form of communication has been replaced with emails. Back in days where people used to wait for days to receive a letter has come to end. This can be done through emails, just on a single click, a message is delivered to the recipient in seconds all around the world. In this modern world, there are some people who still want to use traditional ways of communication. Writing a letter gives them a piece of satisfaction which they cannot get from email, the alternate fast way of communication. Email to some extent are not considered as safe means of conveying messages, these can be hacked and tempered. The letter gives us hard evidence, for example, Insurance companies still use letters as an alternate means of communication. In the end, I will recapitulate by saying the modern world requires modern solutions. The time we are living in is advance, therefore, to cop up with it we need to use all the latest methods of communication. Writing a letter is considered an old fashion thing, this is a long slow process. This can be still used as a secondary means of communication but is not suitable as a primary method. Letters have been replaced with emails.
The 21st century is the era in which technology is enhancing
rapidly
. The need to write
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letters
has been
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reduced
to a minimum
however
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now
new
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methods
of
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communication
are preferred
, Email, Fax, etc.
Still
, there are
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people
out there who are keeping this tradition alive.

In this
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fast
pace of time, we need quick
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methods
of getting things done. The
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letter
is considered
as a slow
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means
of
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communication
however
this form of
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communication
has
been replaced
with emails. Back in
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days where
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people
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used
to wait for days to receive a
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letter
has
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come
to
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end
. This can
be done
through emails,
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just
on a single click, a message
is delivered
to the recipient in seconds all around the world.

In this modern world, there are
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some
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people
who
still
want to
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use
traditional ways of
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communication
. Writing a
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letter
gives them a piece of satisfaction which they cannot
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get
from email, the alternate
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fast
way of
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communication
. Email to
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some
extent are not considered as safe
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
means
of conveying messages, these can
be hacked
and tempered. The
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letter
gives us
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hard
evidence,
for example
, Insurance
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companies
still
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use
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letters
as an alternate
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means
of communication.

In the
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end
, I will recapitulate by saying the modern world requires modern solutions. The time we are living in is advance,
therefore
, to cop up with
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it
we need to
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use
all the latest
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methods
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
communication
. Writing a
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letter
is considered
an
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
fashion thing, this is a long slow process. This can be
still
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
as a secondary
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means
of
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communication
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but
is not suitable as a primary
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method
.
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Letters
have
been replaced
with emails.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
23Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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IELTS essay Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters. with this statement? 66

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
276 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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