Mobile phone and the internet are very useful. However, it is rare for old people to use them. In what ways can mobile phone and the internet be useful to the old people? What could be done to encourage to the old people to use? v.2
Mobile phone and the internet are very useful. However, it is rare for old people to use them. In what ways can mobile phone and the internet be useful to the old people? What could be done to encourage to the old people to use? v. 2
Technology has picturized it' s development by leaps and bounds. Moreover, Through out the globe every individual has his/her gadgets (Mobile Phone, Laptops, MacBook)with them where ever they go. But people of old age find difficulty to adopt these technology. However, There are many ways to help old people so that they could easily manipulate these gadgets in their daily life.
To commence, Old age person is more keen about hearing news, listening to old music or perhaps, to watch cricket. Therefore, Internet can help them to see what they want. Moreover, Using Internet is very simple. For instance, An survey which was conducted in China illustrated that, due to usage of Internet old people who were retired from there job, found that Internet is the best way to utilize their free time. secondly, Mobile Internet encourage every age group people to meet new friends by using social sites(Facebook, Instagram, Skype).
Furthermore, Mobiles phone, Laptops, Macbook
Should be design traditionaly(Old material) which will attract old people towards it. Apart from this companies can store old music app in Mobile phone which would be inbuilt inside the mobile. For example, A mobile company in India has launched a radio which is named as " Karvan" who has around 2, 000 song of old generation. These types of thing facinate old peoole towards them.
To sum up, Techonology is benefical is many ways but, It also has a demerits old people are in a age in which they could be effected by usage of mobile phone.
Technology has picturized
it&
#039; s development by leaps and bounds.
Moreover
,
Through out
the globe every individual has his/her gadgets (Mobile
Phone
, Laptops, MacBook)with them where ever they go.
But
people
of
old
age
find difficulty to adopt
these technology
.
However
, There are
many
ways to
help
old
people
so
that they could
easily
manipulate these gadgets in their daily life.
To commence,
Old
age
person is more keen about hearing news, listening to
old
music or perhaps, to
watch
cricket.
Therefore
, Internet can
help
them to
see
what they want.
Moreover
, Using Internet is
very
simple.
For instance
, An survey which
was conducted
in China illustrated that, due to usage of Internet
old
people
who
were retired
from there job, found that Internet is the best way to utilize their free time.
secondly
, Mobile Internet encourage every
age
group
people
to
meet
new friends by using social sites(Facebook, Instagram, Skype).
Furthermore
, Mobiles
phone
, Laptops,
Macbook
Should be design
traditionaly
(
Old
material) which will attract
old
people
towards it. Apart from
this
companies
can store
old
music app in Mobile
phone
which would be inbuilt inside the mobile.
For example
, A mobile
company
in India has launched a radio which
is named
as
"
;
Karvan"
; who has around 2, 000 song of
old
generation. These types of thing
facinate
old
peoole
towards them.
To sum up,
Techonology
is
benefical
is
many
ways
but
, It
also
has a demerits
old
people
are in
a
age
in which they could
be effected
by usage of mobile
phone
.
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