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Nowadays universities are the best place to get the best knowledge from it. also, it became an important part of our life in spite of taking valuable information from many different fields, we face many new experience we do not face it before. further v.2

Nowadays universities are the best place to get the best knowledge from it. also, it became an important part of our life in spite of taking valuable information from many different fields, we face many new experience we do not face it before. further v. 2
Nowadays universities are the best place to get the best knowledge from it. also, it became an important part of our life in spite of taking valuable information from many different fields, we face many new experience we do not face it before. furthermore, we make the best friend relations from inside and outside our country. that is from my point of view, it is better to invest in the universities infrastructure and the physical plant more than concerning about the faculty satisfaction. First of all, presence of high quality universities indicate caring of government in the educational system that is mean students are the major priority. for this reason, my view clarify the biggest part of investment should go to universities infrastructure. such as, building a center for innovative project that help student to maximize their abilities to create and invent new things or to produce new products, for instance this center presence at Jordan university of science and technology and i have a project it is called EPA that talk about encourage physical activity and reduce risk of having heart diseases. so, this facility helped me a lot to think out the door. Secondly, the investment should be in all the university aspects. such as, my university contain the largest library in Jordan and the medial east with free internet connection that strength the educational process. further more, the availability of good infrastructure will lead to more students enrollment from inside and outside and that is mean better economical status in the university and in the country in general. more over will effect in the university ranking by a positive way. In conclusion, mp point of view is solid and strong enough to clarify why the investment in the universities infrastructure and physical plant is better than caring about the faculty satisfaction.
Nowadays
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universities
are the best place to
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get
the best knowledge from it.
also
, it became an
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important
part of our life
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in spite of
taking valuable information from
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many
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different
fields, we face
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many new experience
we do not face it
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before
.
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furthermore
, we
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make
the best friend relations from inside and outside our country.
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that
is from my point of view, it is better to invest in the
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universities
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infrastructure
and the physical plant more than concerning about the faculty satisfaction.

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First of all
, presence of high quality
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universities
indicate caring of
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government
in the educational system
that is
mean students are the major priority.
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for
this reason, my view clarify the biggest part of investment should go to
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universities
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infrastructure
.
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such
as, building a center for innovative project that
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help
student to maximize their abilities to create and invent new things or to produce new products,
for instance
this center presence at Jordan
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university
of science and technology and
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
have a project it
is called
EPA that talk about encourage physical activity and
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reduce
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risk
of having heart diseases.
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so
, this facility
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helped
me a lot to
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think
out the door.

Secondly
, the investment should be in all the
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university
aspects.
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such
as, my
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university
contain the largest library in Jordan and the medial east with free internet connection that strength the educational process.
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further
more, the availability of
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good
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infrastructure
will lead to more
Apostrophe might be missing. Did you mean "students'" or "student's"?
students
enrollment from inside and outside and
that is
mean better
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economical
status in the
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university
and in the country
in general
.
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more
over will
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effect
in the
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university
ranking by a
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positive
way.

In conclusion
, mp point of view is solid and strong
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enough
to clarify why the investment in the
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universities
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infrastructure
and physical plant is better than caring about the faculty satisfaction.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
14Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15Mistakes
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IELTS essay Nowadays universities are the best place to get the best knowledge from it. also, it became an important part of our life in spite of taking valuable information from many different fields, we face many new experience we do not face it before. further v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
304 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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