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Do you agree or disagree? Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays. v.189

Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays. v. 189
Teachers have been known as the second parents of children. They can either pave the way for further progress or destroy a child' s perspective of education, so they have a significant role in one' s life. One of the heated debates in this realm is that whether teachers had a higher reputation among people in the past. However, there might be some counterexamples about this claim I would argue that today, teachers are not as valued as past. Following reasons will further elaborate on this issue. The first prominent point to be mentioned is that the digital revolution has altered many aspects of family lives. In fact, many families have been transformed into child-centered ones in which parents put a premium on their children’s’ needs. As a result, youths are the ones who can set the rules and ask other family members to follow them. Finally, one day, these adolescents will go to the school, and subsequently, they would try to boss around their teachers as well, and that is why in modern schools, it seems somehow teachers are under the control of students. Consequently, teachers like other adults are not respected enough. For instance, when I was in my high school, we did not use to eat foodstuffs during lesson time. However, I cannot ask my students now to stop eating when I am in the classroom since their parents would support them instead of punishing for this rude behavior. The second rationale behind my idea is rooted in the fact that, modern life has altered not only the moral norms of families but also the teachers' . It is an undeniable fact that teaching is not a high- paying job, and it is based only on dedication and patience. However, nowadays, more and more teachers are teaching their students only for money than ever before. As a result, teachers are losing their position and value in the society after a while. Therefore, I believe that the negative view of teachers’ value in societies is the result of their own behavior. To wrap it up, based on the ideas that were presented above I strongly believe that teachers are not appreciated like before since modern life has changed the social and moral norms of both families and teachers. Let us hope that more and more new teachers try to protect their position in societies by following experienced teachers’ ways.
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Teachers
have
been known
as the second parents of children. They can either pave the way for
further
progress or
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destroy
a
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child&
#039; s perspective of education,
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so
they have a significant role in
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one&
#039; s life. One of the heated debates in this realm is that whether
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teachers
had a higher reputation among
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people
in the past.
However
, there might be
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some
counterexamples about this claim I would argue that
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today
,
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teachers
are not as valued as past. Following reasons will
further
elaborate on this issue.

The
first
prominent point to
be mentioned
is that the digital revolution has altered
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many
aspects of
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family
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lives
. In fact,
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many
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families
have
been transformed
into child-centered
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ones
in which parents put a premium on their children’s’ needs.
As a result
, youths are the
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ones
who can set the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
and ask other
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family
members to follow them.
Finally
, one day, these adolescents will go to the school, and
subsequently
, they would try to boss around their
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teachers
as well
, and
that is
why in modern schools, it seems somehow
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teachers
are under the control of students.
Consequently
,
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teachers
like other adults are not respected
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enough
.
For instance
, when I was in my high school, we did not
Make sure that 'use to' is correct. For habitual actions in the past or to mean 'accustomed to', use "used to".
use to
eat foodstuffs during lesson time.
However
, I cannot ask my students
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stop
eating when I am in the classroom since their parents would support them
instead
of punishing for this rude behavior.

The second rationale behind my
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idea
is rooted
in the fact that, modern life has altered not
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only
the moral norms of
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families
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but
also
the
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teachers&
#039;
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.
It is an undeniable fact that teaching is not a high- paying job, and it
is based
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only
on dedication and patience.
However
, nowadays, more and more
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teachers
are teaching their students
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
for money than ever
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before
.
As a result
,
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teachers
are losing their position and value in the society after a while.
Therefore
, I believe that the
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negative
view of
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teachers’
value in societies is the result of their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
behavior.

To wrap it up, based on the
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ideas
that
were presented
above I
strongly
believe that
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teachers
are not appreciated like
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before
since modern life has
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changed
the social and moral norms of both
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families
and
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teachers
.
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Let
us hope that more and more new
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teachers
try to protect their position in societies by following experienced
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teachers’
ways.
18Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
21Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS essay Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays. v. 189

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
401 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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