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Memorising facts is the most important way to succeed in education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? v.6

The importance of memorising facts is debatable. Some people believe that it is the most significant method to triumph in your studies. This essay will discuss why memorising facts is the most important way to succeed in education. On the one hand, I partly agree with the idea that owning the ability to memorise proven facts so as to get high scores is a key factor. Students who possess great memory capacity would definitely have a certain advantage to get remarkable records in such subjects. For example, when having a History test, the key to success is to remember as many events as possible. Besides, earning by heart is the key to attain basic and fundamental knowledge before gaining some insights into higher education. Then, we can get higher thinking which helps us perform better in the exam. On the other hand, students who memorize information can have tendency to suffer from some unpleasant consequences for some profound and significant reasons. Students relying only on textbooks have difficulties figuring out how to answer the questions that are not from those books. Consequently, those students do not have the ability to put theories into practice. This can result in lower points in their exams. Furthermore, one of the worst thing about this is when trying to remember information, some students just memorise it without understanding the essence. For instance, when having a Chemistry test, it is not enough to know all the definitions and theories. We also have to possess the ability to solve these exercises. Failing to work out the answer may lead to a loss in achieving outstanding endeavour, even though we spend most of our time learning the facts before. In conclusion, I opine that memorising facts from textbooks has a positive influence on a student scores, but this also has some bad consequences. Therefore, together to attain educational achievements rather than just hinging on one way to obtain knowledge.
The importance of
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memorising
facts is debatable.
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Some
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people
believe that it is the most significant method to triumph in your studies. This essay will discuss why
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memorising
facts is the most
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important
way to succeed in education.

On the one hand, I partly
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agree
with the
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idea
that owning the ability to
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memorise
proven facts
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so as to
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get
high scores is a key factor.
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Students
who possess great memory capacity would definitely have a certain advantage to
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get
remarkable records in such subjects.
For example
, when having a History
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test
, the key to success is to remember as
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many
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events
as possible.
Besides
, earning by heart is the key to attain basic and fundamental knowledge
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before
gaining
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some
insights into higher education. Then, we can
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get
higher thinking which
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helps
us perform better in the exam.

On the other hand
,
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students
who
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memorize
information can have tendency to suffer from
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some
unpleasant consequences for
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some
profound and significant reasons.
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Students
relying
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only
on textbooks have difficulties figuring out how to answer the questions that are not from those books.
Consequently
, those
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students
do not have the ability to put theories into practice. This can result in lower points in their exams.
Furthermore
, one of the worst thing about this is when trying to remember information,
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some
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students
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just
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memorise
it without understanding the essence.
For instance
, when having a Chemistry
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test
, it is not
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enough
to know all the definitions and theories. We
also
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have to
possess the ability to solve these exercises. Failing to work out the answer may lead to a loss in achieving outstanding
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endeavour
,
even though
we spend most of our time learning the facts
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before
.
In conclusion
, I opine that
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memorising
facts from textbooks has a
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positive
influence on a
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student
scores,
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but
this
also
has
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some
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bad
consequences.
Therefore
, together to attain educational achievements
rather
than
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just
hinging on one way to obtain knowledge.
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IELTS essay Memorising facts is the most important way to succeed in education. with this statement?

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
322 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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