Modern weddings are more extravagant as compared to the old days. It is true that these ceremonies have negative impacts on the society. However, the upsides of such ceremonies outweigh the downsides.
To begin with, this trend does have its share of drawbacks. Firstly, these marriages leaves a bad precedent on society, especially on middle-class families which sometimes ends up in debt in a bid to match the grandeur and extravagance. Secondly, the concern is about waste generation. Both the consumption of electricity and leftover food waste is highly enormous to bear for an event that lasts merely for a day or two. The over wastage and overspending is a major part of the concern for families that just only hand to mouth.
On the other side, such types of functions provide lots of employment, especially related to blue-collar jobs. Furthermore, these opportunities constricting the grave economic disparity between rich and poor people. In addition, expansive marriages demand relatives to attend both from far and near the end. Therefore, an opportunity to strengthen the bond between kith and kin, such marriage have a special role.
In conclusion, It is lucid that trendy marriages are leads to some futile outcomes, however, these marriages are highly imperative for various relatives to get together and many a person gets work to earn a livelihood. 
Modern weddings are more extravagant as compared to the  
old
 days. It is true that these ceremonies have  
negative
 impacts on the society.  
However
, the upsides of such ceremonies outweigh the downsides.
To  
begin
 with, this trend does have its share of drawbacks.  
Firstly
, these  
marriages
  leaves
 a  
bad
 precedent on society,  
especially
 on middle- 
class
 families which  
sometimes
 ends up in debt in a bid to match the grandeur and extravagance.  
Secondly
, the concern is about waste generation. Both the consumption of electricity and leftover food waste is  
highly
 enormous to bear for an  
event
 that lasts  
merely
 for a day or two. The over wastage and overspending is a major part of the concern for families that  
just
  only
 hand to mouth.
On the other side, such types of functions provide lots of employment,  
especially
 related to blue-collar jobs.  
Furthermore
, these opportunities constricting the grave economic disparity between rich and poor  
people
.  
In addition
, expansive  
marriages
 demand relatives to attend both from far and near the  
end
.  
Therefore
, an opportunity to strengthen the bond between kith and kin, such  
marriage
 have a special role. 
In conclusion
, It is lucid that trendy  
marriages
 are leads to  
some
 futile outcomes,  
however
, these  
marriages
 are  
highly
 imperative for various relatives to  
get
 together and  
many
 a person  
gets
 work to earn a livelihood. 
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