Nowadays, people do not get exercise regularly or often either during the working period or free time on account of the fact that there have health problems, such as physically and mentally ill. In this essay going to describe reasons why human beings have not got enough exercise and how can be fixed that problems.
The first point, that a lot of adults are working longer hours and more days to earn money for luxury life because of that fact they do not have much time for physical activities. As a result of that human have to face a lot of health issues like the kind of illnesses. For instance, diabetes, cholesterol and blood pressure that all of those causes infected to persons as barely strength. On the other reason is persons have a lot of responsibilities to fulfil for their family, such as, look after kids, parents and job even so those duties make persons sick and mental trouble like stress and depression.
Furthermore, every people have to create a time-table by including day to day work and fitness, especially activities which can challenge to previous sickness. Firstly, adults have to join the gym regularly, which is helping to fit mussels and body shape. Additionally, human have to go jogging daily in the early morning, which is helping to maintain body fit and feel refreshed. In addition, all of those factors make the body strong and healthy to fight with disease that makes human weak and having a proper fitness will help to be a beautiful and comfortable.
In conclusion, If people can spend at least one hour of their busy life, that time can spend to do some fitness activities which help to be strong and healthy.
Nowadays,
people
do not
get
exercise
regularly
or
often
either during the working period or free time on account of the fact that there have health problems, such as
physically
and mentally ill. In this essay going to
describe
reasons why
human
beings have not
got
enough
exercise and how can be
fixed
that problems.
The
first
point, that
a lot of
adults are working longer hours and more days to earn money for luxury life
because
of that fact they do not have much time for physical activities.
As
a result of that
human
have to
face
a lot of
health issues like the kind of illnesses.
For instance
, diabetes, cholesterol and blood pressure that all of those causes infected to persons as
barely
strength. On the other reason is persons have
a lot of
responsibilities to fulfil for their family, such as, look after kids, parents and job even
so
those duties
make
persons sick and mental trouble like
stress
and depression.
Furthermore
, every
people
have to
create a time-table by including day to day work and fitness,
especially
activities which can challenge to previous sickness.
Firstly
, adults
have to
join
the gym
regularly
, which is helping to fit mussels and body shape.
Additionally
,
human
have to
go jogging daily in the early morning, which is helping to maintain body fit and feel refreshed.
In addition
, all of those factors
make
the body strong and healthy to fight with disease that
makes
human
weak and having a proper fitness will
help
to be a
beautiful
and comfortable.
In conclusion
, If
people
can spend at least one hour of their busy life, that time can spend to do
some
fitness activities which
help
to be strong and healthy.
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