Nowadays, many workers do not have enough exercise during their working period or in their leisure time. From my knowledge, people have to participate in activities for maintaining their body and be healthy.
The first point that, citizens are being busy with their job because they want to spend luxury life, such as brand new car and luxury house therefore they have to work hard to achieve their goals. In addition, human have a responsibility to do for their family that makes them physical and mental illness. For instance, most of workers are working longer shift, sit in front of a computer, then a few months later they get eye infection and depression resulting from not having proper physical activities.
Another fact that, if residents can spend one hour from their working period or free time that moment can spend in the fitness centre because it creates strong body and feel less stress and this is a popular way of being healthy. Furthermore, people can manage their diet plan which is the main cause of being healthy and it helps to maintain a healthy figure. Additionally, families go for jogging early morning on account of the fact that it helps to maintain body shape and relax their mind in order to feel more active and refreshed. Moreover, this is one of easy and cheap activity people can follow.
In conclusion, residents have for some time from their day to day life cycle to do some fitness activities also balancing their diet system which is helped to stay healthy and strong. 
Nowadays,  
many
 workers do not have  
enough
 exercise during their working period or in their leisure time. From my knowledge,  
people
  have to
 participate in activities for maintaining their body and be healthy.
The  
first
 point that, citizens are being busy with their job  
because
 they want to spend luxury life, such as  
brand new
 car and luxury  
house
  therefore
 they  
have to
 work  
hard
 to achieve their goals.  
In addition
, human have a responsibility to do for their family that  
makes
 them physical and mental illness.  
For instance
,  
most of workers
 are working longer shift, sit in front of a computer, then a few months later they  
get
 eye infection and depression resulting from not having proper physical activities.
Another fact that, if residents can spend one hour from their working period or free time that moment can spend in the fitness  
centre
  because
 it creates strong body and feel less  
stress
 and this is a popular way of being  
healthy
.  
Furthermore
,  
people
 can manage their diet plan which is the main cause of being  
healthy
 and it  
helps
 to maintain a  
healthy
 figure.  
Additionally
, families go for jogging early morning on account of the fact that it  
helps
 to maintain body shape and relax their mind in order to feel more active and refreshed.  
Moreover
, this is one of easy and  
cheap
 activity  
people
 can follow. 
In conclusion
, residents have for  
some
 time from their  
day to day
 life cycle to do  
some
 fitness activities  
also
 balancing their diet system which is  
helped
 to stay  
healthy
 and strong. 
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