Nowadays, many workers do not have enough exercise during their working period or in their leisure time. From my knowledge, people have to participate in activities for maintaining their body and be healthy.
The first point that, citizens are being busy with their job because they want to spend luxury life, such as brand new car and luxury house therefore they have to work hard to achieve their goals. In addition, human have a responsibility to do for their family that makes them physical and mental illness. For instance, most of workers are working longer shift, sit in front of a computer, then a few months later they get eye infection and depression resulting from not having proper physical activities.
Another fact that, if residents can spend one hour from their working period or free time that moment can spend in the fitness centre because it creates strong body and feel less stress and this is a popular way of being healthy. Furthermore, people can manage their diet plan which is the main cause of being healthy and it helps to maintain a healthy figure. Additionally, families go for jogging early morning on account of the fact that it helps to maintain body shape and relax their mind in order to feel more active and refreshed. Moreover, this is one of easy and cheap activity people can follow.
In conclusion, residents have for some time from their day to day life cycle to do some fitness activities also balancing their diet system which is helped to stay healthy and strong.
Nowadays,
many
workers do not have
enough
exercise during their working period or in their leisure time. From my knowledge,
people
have to
participate in activities for maintaining their body and be healthy.
The
first
point that, citizens are being busy with their job
because
they want to spend luxury life, such as
brand new
car and luxury
house
therefore
they
have to
work
hard
to achieve their goals.
In addition
, human have a responsibility to do for their family that
makes
them physical and mental illness.
For instance
,
most of workers
are working longer shift, sit in front of a computer, then a few months later they
get
eye infection and depression resulting from not having proper physical activities.
Another fact that, if residents can spend one hour from their working period or free time that moment can spend in the fitness
centre
because
it creates strong body and feel less
stress
and this is a popular way of being
healthy
.
Furthermore
,
people
can manage their diet plan which is the main cause of being
healthy
and it
helps
to maintain a
healthy
figure.
Additionally
, families go for jogging early morning on account of the fact that it
helps
to maintain body shape and relax their mind in order to feel more active and refreshed.
Moreover
, this is one of easy and
cheap
activity
people
can follow.
In conclusion
, residents have for
some
time from their
day to day
life cycle to do
some
fitness activities
also
balancing their diet system which is
helped
to stay
healthy
and strong.
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7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes