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Many teachers assign homework to students every day Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students Use specific reasons and details to support your answer You should write at least 250 words v.2

Many teachers assign homework to students every day Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students Use specific reasons and details to support your answer v. 2
In modern society, it has been an increasingly popular trend that teachers request students to complete assignments on daily basis. While it seems to be good for students to keep up with the contents taught by the teachers, personally I do not agree with this approach because of a few reasons. To begin with, excessive amount of homework may impact students' understanding of the lectures. As a matter of fact, after attending the class, students often take some time to revise and understand the difficult topics taught by the teachers during the class. With the daily homework assigned to them, they might divert their time finishing the assignments instead of absorbing the knowledge, which might in turns accumulate their misconception on the contents. Compared to those having a lot of homework, students with minimal amount of homework have seen a better perception on the knowledge. Therefore, I think it is detrimental to the students' study if they were given too many exercises. Another insight that must not be neglected, meanwhile, is the necessity for students to relax in order to cope with the study induced pressure. More specifically, having assigned with too much homework, students may not have extra time to take rest, and this might beget high pressure that will impact their mental development. Take Hong Kong as an example where the majority of students receive 10 assignments on average every day, and the rate of getting emotion illness has been the highest around the world during the recent few decades. Consistent with this line of thinking, without enough rest, it is nearly impossible for the students to concentrate on the classes, and this will lead to unsatisfactory academic results at the end which will bring further pressure to the students. In conclusion, I believe that the homework should not be given daily due to its hindrance to students' perception on the contents as well as their mental development. Homework should be given in a reasonable amount instead.
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time to revise and understand the difficult topics taught by the teachers during the
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class
. With the daily
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homework
assigned to them, they might divert their time finishing the assignments
instead
of absorbing the knowledge, which might in turns accumulate their misconception on the contents. Compared to those having
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a lot of
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homework
,
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students
with minimal amount of
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homework
have
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a better perception on the knowledge.
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must
not
be neglected
, meanwhile, is the necessity for
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students
to relax in order to cope with the study induced pressure. More
specifically
, having assigned with too much
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homework
,
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students
may not have extra time to take rest, and this might beget high pressure that will impact their mental development. Take Hong Kong as an example where the majority of
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students
receive 10 assignments on average every day, and the rate of getting emotion illness has been the highest around the world during the recent few decades. Consistent with this line of thinking, without
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enough
rest, it is
nearly
impossible for the
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students
to concentrate on the classes, and this will lead to unsatisfactory academic results at the
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end
which will bring
further
pressure to the students.

In conclusion
, I believe that the
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homework
should not be
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given
daily due to its hindrance to
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students&
#039; perception on the contents
as well
as their mental development.
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should be
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given
in a reasonable amount
instead
.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
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IELTS essay Many teachers assign homework to students every day Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students Use specific reasons and details to support your answer v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
329 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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