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Many teachers assign homework to students every day. Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. v.2

Many teachers assign homework to students every day. Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. v. 2
There is much controversy about the necessity of daily homework for students. Some say homework is necessary since only practice makes perfect, while others disagree because they believe a student should have the freedom to study whatever in whatever forms just as he/she likes to. In my opinion, daily homework is necessary for students. First, a teacher could assign homework as a guide for the students to study. To learn something. A student needs help of a teacher because he/she does not have an overall understanding of the knowledge he is going to study as the teacher. This means, at the begining, a student could not well plan his/her study, just as a kid who is for the first time in a swimming pool could do nothing but play with water. And a teacher could make a good study plan for him/her, so that he/she could learn efficiently. Secondly, sometimes, even when a student, especially a young one, has already understand what he/she should do in order to master some skill or knowledge, he/she is still unwilling to do this for the lack of motivation. Hey, don' t tell me that you have never been lazy at all when you were young. Some homework could function as a task for the student to perform which is helpful to motivate him/her. Thirdly, homework is an important form of feedback for a teacher to understand the effectivity of his/her work. As I have mentioned before, a teacher makes a study plan for the students; but does it really work? or does it work for all the students? It' s not difficult to know this only if the teacher pay some attention to the homework of the students. Then he/she may be able to find if there' s some problems in his/her teaching, and make corresponding adjustment of his/her teaching, either for all the students or for a single one. Without some feedback, it is impossible for the teacher to do this. A test is also a good form of feedback, but obviously one or two tests are not enough, and sometimes this kind of feedback just comes to late. However, This conclusion might be misleading that one may believe all forms of homework are necessary. Actually, only proper amount of homework in proper forms is acceptable; some homework may not only fail to help the students, but on contrary bore them, so much so that they may lose their innate interest to study. " Proper" homework, in my opionion, should vary in its forms; it might be some extensive reading, a paper, or even just a game, as well as other ordinary excercises. And it should leave enough freedom to the students so that they could do things they really like to do with self-motivation, rather than unwillingness. We should always remember that homework is something for us to guide the students, rather than drive them. Only if a teacher keep this in his/her mind, the homework could be of most help to the students.
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say
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is necessary since
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perfect, while others disagree
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should have the freedom to
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whatever in whatever
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forms
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as
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he/she
likes to. In my opinion, daily
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is necessary for students.

First
, a
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could assign
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homework
as a guide for the
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students
to
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study
. To learn something. A
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student
needs
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help
of a
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he/she
does not have an
overall
understanding of the knowledge he is going to
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study
as the
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. This means, at the
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begining
, a
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student
could not well plan
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his/her
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study
,
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as a kid who is for the
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time in a swimming pool could do nothing
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play with water. And a
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could
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a
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good
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study
plan for him/her,
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that
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could learn
efficiently
.

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,
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especially
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understand
what
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should do in order to master
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skill
or knowledge,
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is
still
unwilling to do this for the lack of motivation. Hey,
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don&
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tell
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homework
could function as a task for the
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student
to perform which is helpful to motivate him/her.

Thirdly
,
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is an
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important
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form
of
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feedback
for a
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teacher
to understand the effectivity of
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work. As I have mentioned
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, a
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plan for the
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;
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pay
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of the
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. Then
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may be able to find if
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problems in
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teaching, and
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make
corresponding adjustment of
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teaching, either for all the
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students
or for a single one. Without
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some
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feedback
, it is impossible for the
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teacher
to do this. A
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test
is
also
a
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good
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form
of
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feedback
,
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but
obviously
one or two
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enough
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However
, This conclusion might be misleading that one may believe all
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of
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homework
are necessary. Actually,
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proper amount of
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in proper
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is acceptable;
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may not
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the
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students
,
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on contrary bore them,
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much
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that they may lose their innate interest to
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, in my
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, should vary in its
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; it might be
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extensive reading, a paper, or even
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students
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so
that they could do things they
really
like to do with self-motivation,
rather
than unwillingness. We should always remember that
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is something for us to guide the
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students
,
rather
than drive them.
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if a
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mind, the
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could be of most
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to the
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13Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
74Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11Mistakes

IELTS essay Many teachers assign homework to students every day. Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. v. 2

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
503 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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