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In the past, university students had to go to lectures because this was the only way to teach large numbers of people. Thanks to technology, students no longer need to be taught this way. To what extent do you agree? v.2

In the past, university students had to go to lectures because this was the only way to teach large numbers of people. Thanks to technology, students no longer need to be taught this way. v. 2
Professors have lectured for centuries however technological advances and other forms of teaching have emerged and improved the quality of knowledge. From my point of view, the education system has become interactive since the internet spread and has innovated the teaching method with new resources. online practices have been part of young people' s lives since birth and assumed to be a basic condition of modern life offering besides entertainment, a variety of benefits in the educational sphere. From this perspective, using the internet in the classroom gets students more excited about learning due to activities are often interactive, thus they get the chance to directly engage with information rather than passively listen to lectures. A good example is million of educational videos produced by individual educators and learners offered by Youtube EDU service. Similarly, as classroom technology and online courses have become more prevalent and advanced, teachers and students alike have new ways to study, plan activities, and present information. As a result of the advantages of internet educational growth, has emerged a range of resources like online classes, interactive teaching, and simplified research methods. These new technologies are also, ironically, bringing out the importance of oral persuasion. so, online speeches as TED talks and so forth have sparked new interest in cultivating oratory skills. To conclude, the internet is a growing contribution to what means to learn and has been modifying the forms of teaching, which was once passive and based only on lectures, and nowadays, everyone tends to be active participants in and out of the classroom.
Professors have lectured for centuries
however
technological advances and other forms of
teaching
have emerged and
improved
the quality of knowledge. From my point of view, the education system has become interactive since the internet spread and has innovated the
teaching
method with
new
resources.

online
practices have been part of young
people&
#039; s
lives
since birth and assumed to be a basic condition of modern life offering
besides
entertainment, a variety of benefits in the educational sphere. From this perspective, using the internet in the classroom
gets
students more excited about learning due to activities are
often
interactive,
thus
they
get
the chance to
directly
engage with information
rather
than
passively
listen to lectures. A
good
example is
million
of educational videos produced by individual educators and learners offered by
Youtube
EDU
service.

Similarly
, as classroom technology and online courses have become more prevalent and advanced, teachers and students alike have
new
ways to study, plan activities, and present information.
As a result
of the advantages of internet educational growth, has emerged a range of resources like online classes, interactive
teaching
, and simplified research methods. These
new
technologies are
also
,
ironically
, bringing out the importance of oral persuasion.
so
, online speeches as TED talks and
so
forth have sparked
new
interest in cultivating oratory
skills
.

To conclude
, the internet is a growing contribution to what means to learn and has been modifying the forms of
teaching
, which was once passive and based
only
on lectures, and nowadays, everyone tends to be active participants in and out of the classroom.
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IELTS essay In the past, university students had to go to lectures because this was the only way to teach large numbers of people. Thanks to technology, students no longer need to be taught this way. v. 2

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