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29. Many teachers assign homework to students every day. Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. v.1

29. Many teachers assign homework to students every day. Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. v. 1
Massive technology innovations are happening worldwide. On account of this, such advancements are utilised in monitoring individuals through mobiles and cameras and in most situations, individuals are ignorant of this observation. Is this implementation a gain or loss? This essay will attempt to objectively examine all significant components in detail. Objectivity being of the essence, the following words will weigh one side of the issue against the other. In my opinion, it is beneficial to track humans through gadgets like phones and video cameras. On the other hand, privacy is no longer maintained by monitoring personal devices. The following two paragraphs will delve effectively into both aspects. First, it prevents theft or any criminal offence, likely to take place in a society, shop, amusement park or office. Second, monitoring individuals through the latest technology assists against threats from terrorists. For Instance, bomb detectors and security cameras placed at railway stations have reduced terrorist attacks to a great extent. However, it kills the privacy of an individual and tracking device can also lead to kidnapping. Next, technological enhancement has increased hacking of bank accounts and cyber crime. To corroborate what has just been stated, my colleague lost her savings as her account got hacked by sharing debit card details. In light of the above, positives like protection from thieves are evident. Contrarily, crimes such as kidnapping through mobile tracking command equal consideration. In conclusion, there are at least two ways to examine any situation. In this instance, benefits prevail either side.
Massive technology innovations are happening worldwide. On account of this, such advancements are
utilised
in monitoring
individuals
through
mobiles and cameras and in most situations,
individuals
are ignorant of this observation. Is this implementation a gain or loss? This essay will attempt to
objectively
examine all significant components in detail.

Objectivity being of the essence, the following words will weigh one side of the issue against the other. In my opinion, it is beneficial to
track
humans
through
gadgets like phones and video cameras.
On the other hand
, privacy is no longer maintained by monitoring personal devices. The following two paragraphs will delve
effectively
into both aspects.

First
, it
prevents
theft or any criminal
offence
, likely to take place in a society, shop, amusement park or office. Second, monitoring
individuals
through
the latest technology assists against threats from terrorists.
For Instance
, bomb detectors and security cameras placed at railway stations have
reduced
terrorist attacks to a great extent.

However
, it kills the privacy of an
individual
and tracking device can
also
lead to kidnapping.
Next
, technological enhancement has increased hacking of bank accounts and cyber crime. To corroborate what has
just
been stated
, my colleague lost her savings as her account
got
hacked by sharing debit card
details
.

In light of the above, positives like protection from thieves are evident.
Contrarily
, crimes such as kidnapping
through
mobile tracking command equal consideration.
In conclusion
, there are at least two ways to examine any situation. In this instance, benefits prevail either side.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay 29. Many teachers assign homework to students every day. Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
250 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 7.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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